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6/15/2018 c1 JOHNHAMMOND1993
Apologies, I accidently typed "Like" instead of "Lie"
5/27/2018 c1 JOHNHAMMOND1993
Name: Adam "Ace" Brody, (formally Jackson)
Age: 18
Position: Male Skipper
Appearance: 6'2 Black Hair, glasses, green eyes wears a Captain Jake's Amity Boat tours uniform and a skipper hat.
Likes: Star Wars, Indiana Jones, Thrill rides Chocolate Ice Cream, Root Beer floats
Dislikes: Math, being left behind, being ignored.
Family: He had a sister who at one point said she would take care of him after his mother passed away, but after she got a boyfriend, it seemed that she forgot about him, he was later adopted by Chief Brody.
Personality: Adam Likes technology and video games but he does not like it when people like or cheat, he is patient most of the time.
Backstory: Adam Jackson was born in Orlando Florida, to his Dad Bob and his mother Jenny, he grew up for 5 years with them alongside his older sister Annie, but then sometime after they moved to New York City they were killed in a car crash, he then spent the rest of his childhood with his sister who promised to always be there for him, they also made a tradition of going to the theme parks in Florida every year, however, when she met a boy named Zach who became her boyfriend, she suddenly stopped spending time with him, and kept going out with Zach, she continued to ignore Adam, but the final straw was on his 12th birthday, when she chose to go out with Zach for the day and leave him in the care of a sitter instead of following their tradition of going to the theme parks, he finally snapped and ran away, he hopped a bus and hopped a ferry to Amity at random, however, his money eventually ran out and he was forced to pickpocket to survive, Chief Brody caught him and made him do community service, but when his sentence was up, Brody felt sorry for Adam and took him in, and Adam had been happy for 6 years until the events of the story, Brody arranged for Adam to get a job at Captain Jake's Amity Boat Tours, Captain Jake Grundy was impressed and put him in charge of Amity 5 and Adam became a favorite skipper among the tourists, he also met his true love at the Tour station, Teddy Smith, he asked her out on a date and the two of them hit it off, he is planning to propose to her on her birthday.
P.S. A request for an epilogue if you write one, Adam's sister Annie comes to Amity with her daughter Lily, Annie apologizes for what happened and moves to Amity.
9/5/2012 c1 Steve Freeling
Could you keep his younger son alive too?
8/21/2012 c1 6Dr Moustachio Girl
Sexy Intern Cop
Name: Iza Devinity

Age: 28

OC Position: Intern cop in luurve with Cheif Brody

Appearance: Long mahogany hair (sleek and shiny) with dark blond natural highlights. Nave blue eyes with flecks of honey gold in which change colour from brown to gold wheather she's sad or happy. Slim and trim but built with some muscle on her. Built for long-distance running but can lift/carry a good weight too.

Likes: Besides Brody: Amity Island, Adventure, Red wine (green grapes can make her swell up), snakes, kiddies (either babies or 7 otherwise & I quote 'they're all sticky and messy! *insert disgusted face here*' & Total Wipeout USA

Dislikes: Spiders, Too much heat, X-Factor

Family: Leanne Devinty (mother [Desciesed]), Henry Devinity (father), Jessica McCoy(step-sister), Liliana McCoy (Step-mother), Mia Devinity (baby sister) & John Devinity (twin brother)

Personality (In addition to your selected OC's traits I listed.): Sarcastic, quick-witted, dry humored, flirty

Backstory: When her mother passed away, Iza began pushing herself to do better things than be a PT (personal trainer) so she signed up for the Internship on Amity Island and found love in a certain divorced Chief of Police. While keeping regular constant with her twin brother John and step-sister Jessica she drifted away from her sister Mia, whom became the black-sheep of the Devinity-McCoy clan due to the drugs and assault charges made against her. Her goal in life is to have a life-changing adventure that would set her up with the man of her dreams and hopefully a family of her own to start with.
6/2/2012 c1 4TheLostWriter17
Name:Audrey Evans

Age:21

OC Position: Young Female Skipper

Appearance:Olive colored skin that burns eaisly in the sun, a heart shaped face that is thin, skinny, long wavy tangly black hair that trails down her back, olive shaped green eyes that show her true feelings, big feet and is very tall and pink shell lips. she has a scar on her back because she fell off the roof of her house on a stupid dare.



Likes: boating, swimming and painting

Dislikes: Dancing, math and staying still

Family: Arnold Evans ( father, professor), Marietta Evans(mother, professor), Paige Mavrick nee' Evans (sister, teacher, 27), Paul Mavrick ( brother-in-law,principal,30), Nicholas Mavrick ( nephew, 7), Wisteria "Wisty" Mavrick (niece, 6), Cassidy Mavrick (niece, 2)

Personality: Audrey is very optismistic and always tends to see the light in even the worst situations. She has a lot of marine life smarts and is always sprouting out random facts about differe marine animals like sharks. She can be very tempermental and is usually the one to start fights. She hids her feelings a lot and doesn't usually say somethin until she explodes. She is very athletic and loves sports. She loves to make jokes especially to cheer people up. She is very impulsive. She has a quirk where she is always moving never keeping one body part completely still like tapping her feet or something. She is

Backstory: Audrey was born to Arnold and Marietta Evans on Decemeber 5th in the Bronx ,New York. She was born into a very strict household and was always kept in for studying instead of going outside to play. She was so pressured that at one point she cracked. She was also made inferior and insercure by her siste Paige. She disappointed her parents by not becoming something like a teachr, docter or lawyer but instead becoming a skipper. She keeps little any contact with her parents. She keeps in contact with her siste but only for her nieces and nephew who sometimes visit her.
5/23/2012 c1 6samiamf69
Name: Spencer Marie Davis

Age: 23-27

OC Position: Young Female Skipper OC

Appearance: http:/www.google.com/imgres?hlen&gbv2&biw1249&bih580&tbmisch&tbnidBjt1IEr9SCJwxM:&imgrefurlhttp:/topnews.es/aggregator/sources/1%3Fpage%3D20&docidkWvY-2h1lJK0dM&imgurlhttp:/topnews.in/light/files/dianna-agron9.jpg&w388&h502&ei4YC9T9_0AtDjggfmjcz-Dg&zoom1

The girl looks a little young, but i'm pretty sure she is 26, besides it's just to give you an idea of what she would look like.

Likes: sci-fy, action, and fantasy books/movies. animals. listening to music. Any unhealthy food.

Dislikes: Being bossed around, loud abnoxious tourist girls, crying girls, sappy romance movies, waiting a long time for something, tardiness, bad accents.

Family: Sister age 16, Sabrina Davis.

Personality (In addition to your selected OC's traits I listed.): She pretty much has no life. She works late, then goes home to take care of her little sister. While she is very pretty and saught after, she is very loyal in her relationships. She can be some what recluse, and does not trust other very much. She sticks to a close group of friends which is pretty much 1 or 2 others from work. She can be very kind and is very likable.

Backstory: Her, her sister and her parents were in an accident when she was 17. They were hit and only she and her sister survived. They were in foster care for the couple of months until she became 18 and was legally able to take care of them both. Wishes to be a marine biologist.

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