for Sage, Swordsman and Demon hunter8/30/2018 c4 Jani.Beccharelli
I hope that some day you will decide to update your stories since I quite liked them :)
I hope that some day you will decide to update your stories since I quite liked them :)
6/2/2018 c4 
79YeagerMeister31
Well that was interesting shame it's not been updated in years a promising story
79YeagerMeister31Well that was interesting shame it's not been updated in years a promising story
6/1/2018 c3 YeagerMeister31
Well this is interesting so maybe Kizashi's not gonna be an ass it's just his slut of a wife
Well this is interesting so maybe Kizashi's not gonna be an ass it's just his slut of a wife
5/31/2018 c2 YeagerMeister31
Well that was interesting I guess why Naruto and his friends are stuck with that retard Uchiha is beyond me he deserves nothing but to DIE a SLOW PAINFUL DEATH ALONE
Well that was interesting I guess why Naruto and his friends are stuck with that retard Uchiha is beyond me he deserves nothing but to DIE a SLOW PAINFUL DEATH ALONE
5/31/2018 c1 YeagerMeister31
Well this was interesting Naruto seems interesting and it seems he's wearing his Shippuden attire, the other two Hamano and Riyu seems cool I wonder what will happen when Naruto meets Sakura and will she remember him I wonder who will gain a crush on Hamano, they all seem quite advanced so can't wait for what happen next
Well this was interesting Naruto seems interesting and it seems he's wearing his Shippuden attire, the other two Hamano and Riyu seems cool I wonder what will happen when Naruto meets Sakura and will she remember him I wonder who will gain a crush on Hamano, they all seem quite advanced so can't wait for what happen next
8/31/2014 c1 Guest
Very nice so far even though I'm only 1 chapter in. My only problem with your oc's isn't even a problem with them per say as I like them so far just hoping you give naruto one or two more good jutsu would be nice :) aside from that keep up the good work I must continue reading now
Very nice so far even though I'm only 1 chapter in. My only problem with your oc's isn't even a problem with them per say as I like them so far just hoping you give naruto one or two more good jutsu would be nice :) aside from that keep up the good work I must continue reading now
5/10/2014 c4 8GlitteredCupcakes
Is this like the end? I hope not,
I like how you added two more character that and they seemed to have a really good role in the story, ( I didn't find them bothersome at all) I kinda ship Riyu and Hamano **
Loved your way of writing, specially action scenes. and also I like how you explain each jutsu at the end of the chapter :)
all in all, I loved it, I hope this wasn't the last chapter.
8GlitteredCupcakesIs this like the end? I hope not,
I like how you added two more character that and they seemed to have a really good role in the story, ( I didn't find them bothersome at all) I kinda ship Riyu and Hamano **
Loved your way of writing, specially action scenes. and also I like how you explain each jutsu at the end of the chapter :)
all in all, I loved it, I hope this wasn't the last chapter.
6/3/2013 c5 AllForHighspeed0516
I love this story, and i hope you continue this story. I'm surprised that this hasn't got more reviews.
I love this story, and i hope you continue this story. I'm surprised that this hasn't got more reviews.