4/22/2012 c2 9OTP-Obsessions
omg ur the best lol! i didnt know if u would actually write this but u did and its great! just how i imagined gendrys pov of listening to arya and yoren...im personally kinda pissed that they killed yoren, i liked his character...anywho cant wait to see what u come up with next if u do another gendry/arya chapter! i love them...despite their apparent age differences on the tv show..plus when shes like 12 or 13 she would be the age for "marrying" so shes only like 2-3 years off haha
omg ur the best lol! i didnt know if u would actually write this but u did and its great! just how i imagined gendrys pov of listening to arya and yoren...im personally kinda pissed that they killed yoren, i liked his character...anywho cant wait to see what u come up with next if u do another gendry/arya chapter! i love them...despite their apparent age differences on the tv show..plus when shes like 12 or 13 she would be the age for "marrying" so shes only like 2-3 years off haha
4/22/2012 c2 9GhibliGirl91
The end was EPIC! At first it sounded like he wanted to just change her from what she was, at which stage I was like 'Whut? There's nothing wrong with her!' but it straightened itself out in the next few lines. I lavs it XD
The end was EPIC! At first it sounded like he wanted to just change her from what she was, at which stage I was like 'Whut? There's nothing wrong with her!' but it straightened itself out in the next few lines. I lavs it XD
4/22/2012 c2 23xxsupernaturalgalxx
Aww this was just to cute! sigh ive always wanted a gendry pov in the books, im glad u covered it :)
Aww this was just to cute! sigh ive always wanted a gendry pov in the books, im glad u covered it :)
4/22/2012 c2 1Megton
It's nice to have another chapter so soon after the first ! And now we have to wait at least for the next episode to have something more... (sorry for any mistake, and thanks for your little message in French ;D )
It's nice to have another chapter so soon after the first ! And now we have to wait at least for the next episode to have something more... (sorry for any mistake, and thanks for your little message in French ;D )
4/21/2012 c1 54Laura Scofield
Really enjoyed this, Gendry was always a character I wanted to know more about! You really made his POV interesting. I'm not up to date with series 2 though, and think I'll wait til a few weeks before watching them, so I might have to stop myself reading on with this story until I've watched the episodes. But keep up the terrific writing!
Really enjoyed this, Gendry was always a character I wanted to know more about! You really made his POV interesting. I'm not up to date with series 2 though, and think I'll wait til a few weeks before watching them, so I might have to stop myself reading on with this story until I've watched the episodes. But keep up the terrific writing!
4/21/2012 c1 9GhibliGirl91
I expected this to be a bit slow because it's only action that we've seen already. It's not! There's enough original thought in there to make it enjoyable. Its was veering on the pedo-bear side though, she's only ten. And I know they started young but that's weird that he thought of her that way. You over-qualify things sometimes, and mix figures of speech a bit. But get a good beta and it'll be awesome.
I expected this to be a bit slow because it's only action that we've seen already. It's not! There's enough original thought in there to make it enjoyable. Its was veering on the pedo-bear side though, she's only ten. And I know they started young but that's weird that he thought of her that way. You over-qualify things sometimes, and mix figures of speech a bit. But get a good beta and it'll be awesome.
4/20/2012 c1 3ThatPoppyGirl
Lovely little piece!
Having not seen these episodes, I ope they are as good as you describe.
I look forward to what you write next.
Lovely little piece!
Having not seen these episodes, I ope they are as good as you describe.
I look forward to what you write next.
4/20/2012 c1 9OTP-Obsessions
i love this please continue it as the show progresses! and maybe add a oneshot of him overhearing her conversation with yoren about how she cant sleep? jk if u dont ill get to it eventually its been bugging me so it may become ch4 of arya oneshots lol...seriously love how u gave his view on everything!
i love this please continue it as the show progresses! and maybe add a oneshot of him overhearing her conversation with yoren about how she cant sleep? jk if u dont ill get to it eventually its been bugging me so it may become ch4 of arya oneshots lol...seriously love how u gave his view on everything!
4/20/2012 c1 Aw
Yay I loved it. I haven't read the books yet. I'm just going off the TV show but I love Arya and Gendry.
Yay I loved it. I haven't read the books yet. I'm just going off the TV show but I love Arya and Gendry.
4/20/2012 c1 287ThomE.Gemcity-06
I really liked this. You did great.
Are you going to do more? I hope that you do.
I heart the hell out of all Arya & Gendry fics!
I really liked this. You did great.
Are you going to do more? I hope that you do.
I heart the hell out of all Arya & Gendry fics!