4/16/2016 c1 X.summergrey.X is Retarded
Your writing was terrible, and your grammar sucked. It's obvious you don't know what you're doing.

7/26/2012 c2 zoroxsanji lover
ahahahahhahahahahaha...["He looked like a lost puppy without you, Sanji." Luffy stated.]-the best sentence ever xD :D

4/30/2012 c2 MatzedaGreat
really, for you're first story it was amazing! *_*

btw did you read the doujin "pirat ship noah" cause this quote "It's probably that damn shitty marimo fault for having no respect for anything." reminded me of it xD

there are some spelling mistakes [ wild anime xD] but okay!

I hope you continue to write fics! it was really nice work :D