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61Jonathan 81
well, dont worry. if you need help, it's cool. i'm here when you need me. other than that, great chapter. i like the rori dynamic and how it grows. rex is always killing the mood, huh? good work.
61Jonathan 81well, dont worry. if you need help, it's cool. i'm here when you need me. other than that, great chapter. i like the rori dynamic and how it grows. rex is always killing the mood, huh? good work.
5/14/2012 c5 7SuperNeos2
OMG, Rori is the cutest pairing in the Victorious archive. You do it so well.
7SuperNeos2OMG, Rori is the cutest pairing in the Victorious archive. You do it so well.
5/8/2012 c4 23MaybeWolf
Light on the Rori, but sometimes you just gotta do it to move the story along. Good call of the way you've split this dude. I might be adding some flair or whatever, but I really like the way you've structured and written everybody.
23MaybeWolfLight on the Rori, but sometimes you just gotta do it to move the story along. Good call of the way you've split this dude. I might be adding some flair or whatever, but I really like the way you've structured and written everybody.
5/8/2012 c4 61Jonathan 81
i thought the chapter worked out very well, and you can definitely see the concern tori has for robbie which i find always great to work with rori. i cant wait for chapter 5.
and since i got you here, if you ever need any help, let me know. im more than willing to help other rori writers. just send me a private message.
61Jonathan 81i thought the chapter worked out very well, and you can definitely see the concern tori has for robbie which i find always great to work with rori. i cant wait for chapter 5.
and since i got you here, if you ever need any help, let me know. im more than willing to help other rori writers. just send me a private message.
5/3/2012 c3 61Jonathan 81
you gotta love tori wanting to help robbie. pure rori goodness here, Taggert. I dont mind the short chapters. just keep them coming. bring on chapter 4.
61Jonathan 81you gotta love tori wanting to help robbie. pure rori goodness here, Taggert. I dont mind the short chapters. just keep them coming. bring on chapter 4.
4/29/2012 c2 61Jonathan 81
i love the rori in this chapter. such a great chapter. tori friendship is such a great tool for forming the 'ship. great 2nd chapter.
61Jonathan 81i love the rori in this chapter. such a great chapter. tori friendship is such a great tool for forming the 'ship. great 2nd chapter.
4/21/2012 c1 ZenNoMai
Wow, if I didn't know this is a Rori, I would have guess a Rade from the dialouge. Great job.
Wow, if I didn't know this is a Rori, I would have guess a Rade from the dialouge. Great job.
4/20/2012 c1 61Jonathan 81
nice start. im always up for more rori. so, please. continue. having maybewolf part of this is just extra gravy. good work to the both of you.
61Jonathan 81nice start. im always up for more rori. so, please. continue. having maybewolf part of this is just extra gravy. good work to the both of you.