
5/30/2012 c13 Stunningfire
OHMIGOSH NOOOO. DX they broke up! DDD: *cries*
and i find it funny that Fang's like, "I haven't seen anything that black" and he's the guy who's always dressed in black and stuffs :P
OHMIGOSH NOOOO. DX they broke up! DDD: *cries*
and i find it funny that Fang's like, "I haven't seen anything that black" and he's the guy who's always dressed in black and stuffs :P
5/29/2012 c14
5FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
the fuck is wrong with you? really? you have to make max such an evil sadistic creature? I still like you, but not this story as much.

the fuck is wrong with you? really? you have to make max such an evil sadistic creature? I still like you, but not this story as much.
5/29/2012 c13 FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
THAT IS F***ING SAD AND MESSED UP! but its still good. BUT STILL ITS F***ING MESSED UP!
THAT IS F***ING SAD AND MESSED UP! but its still good. BUT STILL ITS F***ING MESSED UP!
5/28/2012 c14
32bordeaux cookies
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I'm seriously starting to think you're emo with all this blood DX

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I'm seriously starting to think you're emo with all this blood DX
5/28/2012 c13 obessed with fanfiction
be careful what you make Max do some ppl dont like things like that but you are doing awesome with the story
be careful what you make Max do some ppl dont like things like that but you are doing awesome with the story
5/20/2012 c12
5FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
OH MY GODE! The whole PMS thing sent me into HYSTERICS! again. I NEED YOU TO UPDATE! Where did you get the idea?
FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide

OH MY GODE! The whole PMS thing sent me into HYSTERICS! again. I NEED YOU TO UPDATE! Where did you get the idea?
FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
5/20/2012 c12
32bordeaux cookies
Haha, so much action :)
A bit confusing, but enjoyable. Like Max is evil! She and Fang die! They resurrect! She's not evil anymore!
EVILNESS AGAIN!
Lots of makey-outy sessions XD
Update soon :)

Haha, so much action :)
A bit confusing, but enjoyable. Like Max is evil! She and Fang die! They resurrect! She's not evil anymore!
EVILNESS AGAIN!
Lots of makey-outy sessions XD
Update soon :)
5/19/2012 c11
5FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
OMG I CANT GET ENOUGH OF THIS! Sorry for reviewing every chapter, but it is just too good to not. THAT MOVE WAS THE MOST BADASS MOVE EVER! *cough* the nuts *cough* was by far the best part of this chapter! This chapter is so far the best part of the story! I absolutly HATE Dylan so i was very pleased with his death, VERY pleased. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
That gives me ideas for my story. But dont worry, i would never steal anything from another author. if i have, sorry, but i wouldnt have known so cry me a river, build me a bridge, and get over it. Not to you, Fax is forever. To any other authors that may be reading this. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! you MUST write more stories and chapters!

OMG I CANT GET ENOUGH OF THIS! Sorry for reviewing every chapter, but it is just too good to not. THAT MOVE WAS THE MOST BADASS MOVE EVER! *cough* the nuts *cough* was by far the best part of this chapter! This chapter is so far the best part of the story! I absolutly HATE Dylan so i was very pleased with his death, VERY pleased. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
That gives me ideas for my story. But dont worry, i would never steal anything from another author. if i have, sorry, but i wouldnt have known so cry me a river, build me a bridge, and get over it. Not to you, Fax is forever. To any other authors that may be reading this. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! you MUST write more stories and chapters!
5/19/2012 c10 FrenchFrylovesMaximumRide
THIS IS TOO GOOD! But what i don't get is why the pass out so much.
THIS IS TOO GOOD! But what i don't get is why the pass out so much.