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5/1/2012 c1 1Lord Atreyu Emyrs
I tried to read this, but your spelling annoys me. Did you use a spell-checker at all?
4/22/2012 c2 1kyuubihooper0
Great chapter, hope you update soon and keep up the good work!
4/21/2012 c1 davethedark
update soon
4/20/2012 c1 anon
Fucking. Horrible. Please... die.
4/20/2012 c1 Super Saiyan God Gogeta
Good start. Only problem was the cliches.
4/20/2012 c1 kyuubihooper0
I like it so far, however there are some grammatical errors. You should probably get a beta reader in the future. Also you shouldn't make naruto god-like and unbeatable too fast. You should make him grow over time, but that is just my opinion. Update soon and keep up the good work!

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