for Sons and Daughter of the dead, the sea and the sky12/23/2015 c25 Kittykat
Why don't u focus on Percy and annabeth I really want them to be together
Why don't u focus on Percy and annabeth I really want them to be together
12/14/2015 c25 
9awesomeninja09
What if Luke does something stupid and duels Percy in sword fighting. Luke could then play dirty and get a few friends to battle with him, but Percy will still win. Then Luke can get banished and that's when he leaves to join Kronos.
With Luke out of the picture, Camp moves along slowly until a giant monsters attack from Kronos' army lead by Luke. Ethan is there too.
So they battle, then Thalia gets hurt and Percy tears himself up about it because she had gotten hurt protecting him. So Percy is mad at himself, Thalia is hurt, and Nico doesn't exactly know what's going on.
When Thalia wakes up (cause she will) a sabotage takes place and Annabeth is kidnapped. A quest is sent to go and get her, and Percy is in it but Thalia and Nico are not.
That way, with the different POVs, you can show what's happening at Canp and what's happening during the quest. You can finish it from there.
But it's just a suggestion! Wow. I might have to use this idea...
Sorry. This is much longer than Id planned for it to be. Please update soon! It's been over a year!
:)
9awesomeninja09What if Luke does something stupid and duels Percy in sword fighting. Luke could then play dirty and get a few friends to battle with him, but Percy will still win. Then Luke can get banished and that's when he leaves to join Kronos.
With Luke out of the picture, Camp moves along slowly until a giant monsters attack from Kronos' army lead by Luke. Ethan is there too.
So they battle, then Thalia gets hurt and Percy tears himself up about it because she had gotten hurt protecting him. So Percy is mad at himself, Thalia is hurt, and Nico doesn't exactly know what's going on.
When Thalia wakes up (cause she will) a sabotage takes place and Annabeth is kidnapped. A quest is sent to go and get her, and Percy is in it but Thalia and Nico are not.
That way, with the different POVs, you can show what's happening at Canp and what's happening during the quest. You can finish it from there.
But it's just a suggestion! Wow. I might have to use this idea...
Sorry. This is much longer than Id planned for it to be. Please update soon! It's been over a year!
:)
12/12/2015 c25 Nick
They Should stay at camp
They Should stay at camp
12/9/2015 c13 Guest
I love how the gods actually love their children that much in this story
I love how the gods actually love their children that much in this story
12/8/2015 c25 Guest
I don't have any ideas but what about adding a bit of Percabeth and Thaluke?
I don't have any ideas but what about adding a bit of Percabeth and Thaluke?
12/7/2015 c25 Guest
Why not just leave it here and then have an epilogue?
Why not just leave it here and then have an epilogue?
9/4/2015 c25 TheAdamantWarrior
I've got an idea
How about you get a Titan and a hundred monster or so
And make them attack camp and make Thalia Nico and Percy take the Titan and the campers take the monsters
Hope I helped this is really good and want to read more of it
I've got an idea
How about you get a Titan and a hundred monster or so
And make them attack camp and make Thalia Nico and Percy take the Titan and the campers take the monsters
Hope I helped this is really good and want to read more of it
8/16/2015 c25 Guest
Why don't u write about Anabeth and Percy becoming better friends. also add "evil" Luke parts, where Luke tries to make Percy,Thalia,and Nico screw up?
BTW my name is Lidia P.
I don't have a fanfic account... AWESOME story,ur a GREAT writer
Why don't u write about Anabeth and Percy becoming better friends. also add "evil" Luke parts, where Luke tries to make Percy,Thalia,and Nico screw up?
BTW my name is Lidia P.
I don't have a fanfic account... AWESOME story,ur a GREAT writer
6/6/2015 c25 guest
Umm.. nice plot... how about a confrontation between the hunters and percy? And please please please. . No Thalico..that would be too weird here.. and if Luke's not evil, how would you resurrect Kronos? Maybe focus on that a bit?
Umm.. nice plot... how about a confrontation between the hunters and percy? And please please please. . No Thalico..that would be too weird here.. and if Luke's not evil, how would you resurrect Kronos? Maybe focus on that a bit?
4/10/2015 c1 19Smiling Seshat
I'm still a bit iffy about how easily the parents took their kids in when it's expressedly forbidden in the books. It feels too easy to me.
19Smiling SeshatI'm still a bit iffy about how easily the parents took their kids in when it's expressedly forbidden in the books. It feels too easy to me.
4/5/2015 c25 Lucarionape
Maybe have Percy and Thalia fall in love ?
Maybe have Percy and Thalia fall in love ?
3/24/2015 c25 pandalover
Sacrifice to the muses! sing a weird song!
Do something to get their attention! this story is awsome! please update soon!
Sacrifice to the muses! sing a weird song!
Do something to get their attention! this story is awsome! please update soon!
3/16/2015 c25 5StarTrail
I don't have any ideas, but I can give you my support! This story is so great and I know you can find inspiration! XD
5StarTrailI don't have any ideas, but I can give you my support! This story is so great and I know you can find inspiration! XD
2/14/2015 c25 Guest
Great book!
Great book!