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4/26 c48 Guest
might talk with Albus about creating an official document designating ANYONE TEACHING YOU to be considered as faculty of 'The Light.'" He sighed. So...he wants to disqualify himself. Remus etc from helping Harry?
might talk with Albus about creating an official document designating ANYONE TEACHING YOU to be considered as faculty of 'The Light.'" He sighed. So...he wants to disqualify himself. Remus etc from helping Harry?
4/24 c87 WhatHaveIDiscovered
That was quite the take on 4th year! While i may have gotten POV-shift fatigue at times, i did enjoy the story overall. Well done, and thanks for sharing!
That was quite the take on 4th year! While i may have gotten POV-shift fatigue at times, i did enjoy the story overall. Well done, and thanks for sharing!
4/21 c17 Guest
Oh dear, Molly seems quite determined to break the friendship alliance. Her immediate hostile, intrusive and obstructive behavior towards Sirius is certainly less than friendly. Ron's jealousy and quick temper are a bit unfriendly as well. Excellent story. THANKS
Oh dear, Molly seems quite determined to break the friendship alliance. Her immediate hostile, intrusive and obstructive behavior towards Sirius is certainly less than friendly. Ron's jealousy and quick temper are a bit unfriendly as well. Excellent story. THANKS
4/9 c87 Tulugaq
One of the best stories I’ve ever read on this site, and I’ve been here for twenty years. Well done!
One of the best stories I’ve ever read on this site, and I’ve been here for twenty years. Well done!
4/6 c85 Sterling-Ag
You've kept mentioning how chilly it is in the last couple of chapters. It's like you forgot it's the middle of summer in your story. Still, this is one of my favorite stories.
You've kept mentioning how chilly it is in the last couple of chapters. It's like you forgot it's the middle of summer in your story. Still, this is one of my favorite stories.
4/4 c29 Guest
I love this Story so much..Harry and the relationship he gains with Sirius and Remus is just Beautiful.
I have to damit that Hermione is annoying me, But thats Personal feelings and i dislike her Most of the time anyway.
But other than her it is a Beautiful Story
I love this Story so much..Harry and the relationship he gains with Sirius and Remus is just Beautiful.
I have to damit that Hermione is annoying me, But thats Personal feelings and i dislike her Most of the time anyway.
But other than her it is a Beautiful Story
4/1 c1 Segnoqua
Also just wanted to add really like the idea of the coven, the futures of the Hogwarts four (five), alliance and the packs! Would love to hear more about how life goes on for everyone if you feel inspired to return to this with a sequel!
Also just wanted to add really like the idea of the coven, the futures of the Hogwarts four (five), alliance and the packs! Would love to hear more about how life goes on for everyone if you feel inspired to return to this with a sequel!
4/1 c87 Segnoqua
Thank you for a wonderful, thoughtful story. I loved every chapter. Loved how the different characters had their own motives, both light and dark. Loved that Bella was removed early onvery refreshing to see other villains take her place. Loved the inclusion of Morgana and that whole arc. The OCs. Appreciated how the characters acted their ages while also rising to extremely difficult challenges. A tough line to walk I think (and while I enjoyed very powerful h/Hr stories, it was fun to read the kids here as kids who think for themselves but still kids). It felt so believable. Really enjoyed the character dev of the likes of Benjamin Nott, Narcissa and Draco. Thanks for a wonderful read.
Thank you for a wonderful, thoughtful story. I loved every chapter. Loved how the different characters had their own motives, both light and dark. Loved that Bella was removed early onvery refreshing to see other villains take her place. Loved the inclusion of Morgana and that whole arc. The OCs. Appreciated how the characters acted their ages while also rising to extremely difficult challenges. A tough line to walk I think (and while I enjoyed very powerful h/Hr stories, it was fun to read the kids here as kids who think for themselves but still kids). It felt so believable. Really enjoyed the character dev of the likes of Benjamin Nott, Narcissa and Draco. Thanks for a wonderful read.
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2Elizabeth loines
Oh wow have you been planning this from the start? This is amazing planning!
2Elizabeth loinesOh wow have you been planning this from the start? This is amazing planning!
3/9 c25 Segnoqua
This chapter with Mother and Lamia is just brilliant! Enjoying this story very much. Thank you!
This chapter with Mother and Lamia is just brilliant! Enjoying this story very much. Thank you!