for Plan: Lose A Guy In Ten Days12/2/2015 c8 Fire dragon secret art
Nooooo whyyyyy? it is amazing one of the best things Ive ever read and you HAVE to stop!
Nooooo whyyyyy? it is amazing one of the best things Ive ever read and you HAVE to stop!
7/9/2015 c9 
28theVERYCONFUSEDgirl
I'm sorry you feel that way Anna and I hope you life gets better I am in a similar boat and it may not have been written the best but it was worth reading and even if you don't continue i urge you not to delete this because it was enjoyable. Maybe not a twist and shout but better then most the poop on this site anymore. It was readable and enjoyable, even if the plot was reuse I still consider it worth my time to have read. I wish you the best in life and with your struggles.
Fly on
28theVERYCONFUSEDgirlI'm sorry you feel that way Anna and I hope you life gets better I am in a similar boat and it may not have been written the best but it was worth reading and even if you don't continue i urge you not to delete this because it was enjoyable. Maybe not a twist and shout but better then most the poop on this site anymore. It was readable and enjoyable, even if the plot was reuse I still consider it worth my time to have read. I wish you the best in life and with your struggles.
Fly on
6/16/2014 c9 Guest
Okay so I don't hate you but I must say I'm slightly disappointed. So maybe you could've done a little bit better in your writing but I do enjoy these stories. I really hope you find a way to rewrite some of them. I'm really going to miss you and all of your writings.
-a loving fan
Okay so I don't hate you but I must say I'm slightly disappointed. So maybe you could've done a little bit better in your writing but I do enjoy these stories. I really hope you find a way to rewrite some of them. I'm really going to miss you and all of your writings.
-a loving fan
5/31/2014 c9 Guest
I'm too lazy to log in but you should pm me about what happens next
I'm too lazy to log in but you should pm me about what happens next
1/24/2014 c9 2St.SilverWings
Hello Ms. Fanna!
I am writing to you today (or tonight I guess) at 12:46 because I see bits and pieces of my own thoughts in yours.
I'm going to preface this comment saying that I have no idea how old you are, when you read these books, how long ago you read them or which book you ended at. Since that's taken care of, I will proceed.
Of course you fell out of love with MR. I hardly know anyone who still loves the series today, and they all stopped at random times. I, myself, read up to Fang and then forced myself to quit. After reading Fang, I just wanted to have a bonfire with the books. I should've stopped myself after STWAOES. Seriously, when Ari died so did the series. So yes, you were bound to fall out of love.
And as far as writing goes, yeah, you're no Shakespeare, but chicka, count your stars, you're no Stephanie Meyers. But you had an idea; that's where it counts. You can be taught syntax and literary devices, however, it's a lot harder to teach creativity. I haven't read one of these stories before. There's a million "flock goes to school" "fangs a player" "somebody got abused" or "im a famous popstar" MR fanfictions. I haven't seen a lot of these, and that's what counts. You know you're meant to write when you read a book and you've created a dozen other scenarios and outcomes. And you seem like you did that when you read the books.
I fell out of love with MR, heck, I fell out of love with fanfiction for a while. But I came back and the characters grew with me. The older I became, the more ideas I had, the more thoughts I had about how they would respond and react to certain things.
So my dear Fanna, as I finish writing at 1:11, correct me if I'm wrong. I think you fell out of love with MR, but you still can't let go of Maximum Ride.
Just food for thought, take it as you will.
-St. S. Wings
Ps sorry about the wonky format
2St.SilverWingsHello Ms. Fanna!
I am writing to you today (or tonight I guess) at 12:46 because I see bits and pieces of my own thoughts in yours.
I'm going to preface this comment saying that I have no idea how old you are, when you read these books, how long ago you read them or which book you ended at. Since that's taken care of, I will proceed.
Of course you fell out of love with MR. I hardly know anyone who still loves the series today, and they all stopped at random times. I, myself, read up to Fang and then forced myself to quit. After reading Fang, I just wanted to have a bonfire with the books. I should've stopped myself after STWAOES. Seriously, when Ari died so did the series. So yes, you were bound to fall out of love.
And as far as writing goes, yeah, you're no Shakespeare, but chicka, count your stars, you're no Stephanie Meyers. But you had an idea; that's where it counts. You can be taught syntax and literary devices, however, it's a lot harder to teach creativity. I haven't read one of these stories before. There's a million "flock goes to school" "fangs a player" "somebody got abused" or "im a famous popstar" MR fanfictions. I haven't seen a lot of these, and that's what counts. You know you're meant to write when you read a book and you've created a dozen other scenarios and outcomes. And you seem like you did that when you read the books.
I fell out of love with MR, heck, I fell out of love with fanfiction for a while. But I came back and the characters grew with me. The older I became, the more ideas I had, the more thoughts I had about how they would respond and react to certain things.
So my dear Fanna, as I finish writing at 1:11, correct me if I'm wrong. I think you fell out of love with MR, but you still can't let go of Maximum Ride.
Just food for thought, take it as you will.
-St. S. Wings
Ps sorry about the wonky format
11/25/2013 c1 6Make FFN Sensible Again
Please don't take this down just yet. Someone on fictionpress plagiarized this story, and if you delete this story we can't resolve the problem.
6Make FFN Sensible AgainPlease don't take this down just yet. Someone on fictionpress plagiarized this story, and if you delete this story we can't resolve the problem.
11/19/2013 c9 FlippyTable
To be honest, I really do like this story. But if you think it would be best to take it down, then I really can't do anything about it can I? I'm glad you decided to write this though. I was hoping you would finish it, but yeah... I understand about the whole falling out of love with MR thing. Thanks for writing this though. I enjoyed reading it.
To be honest, I really do like this story. But if you think it would be best to take it down, then I really can't do anything about it can I? I'm glad you decided to write this though. I was hoping you would finish it, but yeah... I understand about the whole falling out of love with MR thing. Thanks for writing this though. I enjoyed reading it.
11/19/2013 c9 Pineapple
Awhhhhh... But I guess it's fine. I've fallen out with lots of things, but I'm kinda pissed no one knows the ending now. Wells, you did a good job, at least.
Awhhhhh... But I guess it's fine. I've fallen out with lots of things, but I'm kinda pissed no one knows the ending now. Wells, you did a good job, at least.
11/12/2013 c9 Guest
Don't forget, if someone adopts it please let us know who
Don't forget, if someone adopts it please let us know who
11/7/2013 c9 greenhornovelist
I'm not gonna lie, if you are done, then I will need a moment for shock to set in because I like this. And I DO love it, and don't you tell me otherwise because you know it was a decent story. Far better than a lot of other stories other people post on this awesome site. So, just keep writing more awesome stories.
I'm not gonna lie, if you are done, then I will need a moment for shock to set in because I like this. And I DO love it, and don't you tell me otherwise because you know it was a decent story. Far better than a lot of other stories other people post on this awesome site. So, just keep writing more awesome stories.
10/30/2013 c9 jade1208
i love it ! write more author! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
(P.S. VVVVVVV IS A BUNCH OF V'S)
i love it ! write more author! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
(P.S. VVVVVVV IS A BUNCH OF V'S)
10/29/2013 c9 Guest
NOOOOOOOO DONT DO THIS TO ME I ADORE YOUR STORIES THEYRE JUST PERFECT!
NOOOOOOOO DONT DO THIS TO ME I ADORE YOUR STORIES THEYRE JUST PERFECT!
10/28/2013 c9 Guest
why do you keep doing thissss, why would we review if we dont like them? ive been reading your stories all morning and i really really enjoy it! especially this one!
why do you keep doing thissss, why would we review if we dont like them? ive been reading your stories all morning and i really really enjoy it! especially this one!