for A Red Letter Day8/10/2013 c1 akane-sato
This was a well written piece although it was a bit tedious at some points. Keep writing, your amazing!
This was a well written piece although it was a bit tedious at some points. Keep writing, your amazing!
10/22/2012 c1 
69JDKloosterman
Interesting. Not at all sure what's going on here, Atta seems to be a totally original character and its hard to reconcile him with the story proper. Tea's and Tom's cameo was fun but a little distracting. That aside, Jack's description of his condition, as well as Annie's use of her powers, is all very fun. Good story.
69JDKloostermanInteresting. Not at all sure what's going on here, Atta seems to be a totally original character and its hard to reconcile him with the story proper. Tea's and Tom's cameo was fun but a little distracting. That aside, Jack's description of his condition, as well as Annie's use of her powers, is all very fun. Good story.
5/2/2012 c1 3JoojooBrother
Well written! These are very similar characters in terms of ability and I'd love to see them hang out more in the comic.
Tom and Tea showing up was awesome as well!
3JoojooBrotherWell written! These are very similar characters in terms of ability and I'd love to see them hang out more in the comic.
Tom and Tea showing up was awesome as well!
4/22/2012 c1 Flyingbicycle is v. lazy
This is excellent in every way! I'm terribly jealous. :) Not only have you beautifully captured the characters, you're created an imaginative story with them. I'll be following this story very closely (I assume this will have multiple chapters?). Also, I'm pleased to meet someone else with a fondness for the expression "hell's teeth."
This is excellent in every way! I'm terribly jealous. :) Not only have you beautifully captured the characters, you're created an imaginative story with them. I'll be following this story very closely (I assume this will have multiple chapters?). Also, I'm pleased to meet someone else with a fondness for the expression "hell's teeth."