for Double Demon3/27/2021 c2 Guest
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Minamina Shimawaaaaaa Atakai Paina-Puru-Puru Atama-Boka-Boka Aho Bakaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
11/23/2013 c15 
6TheGrammarNaziIsHere
love the way they joined the crew its going to be an amazing sequel
6TheGrammarNaziIsHerelove the way they joined the crew its going to be an amazing sequel
7/26/2013 c1 4Jade Vargas
Well. Good start. But people sweat drop during every other sentence. *sweat drops*
4Jade VargasWell. Good start. But people sweat drop during every other sentence. *sweat drops*
4/23/2013 c14 Guest
yes more i said more do you hear me i said more
yes more i said more do you hear me i said more
4/22/2013 c6 Guest
_ cool
_ cool
9/29/2012 c1 Guest
fun
fun
8/25/2012 c5 The Prophet Of Lies
... i can't deal i loved first 2 chaps then shit seems to have hit the fan to pure jokes
... i can't deal i loved first 2 chaps then shit seems to have hit the fan to pure jokes
8/18/2012 c13 the.D.Pirates
awesome battle! keep on writing, cuz i like the story from the beginning! Btw you can try including the strawhat pirates join the battle using their new awesome powers(awesome black rope dragon twister by zoro can help spice up the susanoo)
awesome battle! keep on writing, cuz i like the story from the beginning! Btw you can try including the strawhat pirates join the battle using their new awesome powers(awesome black rope dragon twister by zoro can help spice up the susanoo)
8/12/2012 c12 BlackFoxoftheMoon
Great chapter! Love the story please continue As Soon As Possible! :)
Great chapter! Love the story please continue As Soon As Possible! :)
6/28/2012 c10 9crazyrubsoff
wow, something i can actually read. i haven't had any of that lately. maybe some interaction between strawhats and newcomers will give you somewhere to go. plot building fluff
(like mortar between bricks)
9crazyrubsoffwow, something i can actually read. i haven't had any of that lately. maybe some interaction between strawhats and newcomers will give you somewhere to go. plot building fluff
(like mortar between bricks)
6/15/2012 c9 crazyrubsoff
is this after the one piece timeskip cause if so then Luffy could teach Shikamaru about Haki... me again. if you are wondering i AM actually a she, a very crazy one, but i don't mind being mixed up. I mean hey, i cut my hair off for a reason!
is this after the one piece timeskip cause if so then Luffy could teach Shikamaru about Haki... me again. if you are wondering i AM actually a she, a very crazy one, but i don't mind being mixed up. I mean hey, i cut my hair off for a reason!
6/3/2012 c7 crazyrubsoff
great idea bringing someone else in maybe something along the lines of (Sakura Haruno, Kakashi hatake, you will join Naruto on his quest. -Granny Tsunade) note: quotation marks cause my browser to crash, otherwise I would use them. . .
great idea bringing someone else in maybe something along the lines of (Sakura Haruno, Kakashi hatake, you will join Naruto on his quest. -Granny Tsunade) note: quotation marks cause my browser to crash, otherwise I would use them. . .