for Hallmark's Got Nothin' On Dean Winchester6/6/2012 c1 
2JamesParker
Ms. Angel,
Funny, insightful, sweet, sexy and completely genuine to the characters. Why wouldn't pleasure work? What a good idea, and an idea that Dean wouldn't overlook.
This line...
"Hey, all I'm sayin' is..." - sweeping his hand down the length of his body to prove his point - "...I woulda come home with pie."
Dean would have come home with pie. And the cheesy porn dialog would have me handing over whatever Dean wanted.
Those boys. Soulmates indeed.
I think I owe you; I better get to work, huh?
Love,
JamesParker
2JamesParkerMs. Angel,
Funny, insightful, sweet, sexy and completely genuine to the characters. Why wouldn't pleasure work? What a good idea, and an idea that Dean wouldn't overlook.
This line...
"Hey, all I'm sayin' is..." - sweeping his hand down the length of his body to prove his point - "...I woulda come home with pie."
Dean would have come home with pie. And the cheesy porn dialog would have me handing over whatever Dean wanted.
Those boys. Soulmates indeed.
I think I owe you; I better get to work, huh?
Love,
JamesParker
5/2/2012 c1 65BlackBeautyQueen33
Wow this was very good and hot with a bit of angst on the side just how I like it. You did an excellent job dear
65BlackBeautyQueen33Wow this was very good and hot with a bit of angst on the side just how I like it. You did an excellent job dear
4/23/2012 c1 mb64
Oh, you did a marvelous job on this!
Schmoopy and hot and fun and hot and wonderful and hot. After this review sends I am going back to read it again!
Oh, you did a marvelous job on this!
Schmoopy and hot and fun and hot and wonderful and hot. After this review sends I am going back to read it again!
4/22/2012 c1 2mjlove1
WOW YOU WROTE A STORY! you havent written in sooo long! okay things i loved: the schmoop, first and foremost. and the sex...seriously? SO. HOT. then there was one part i made myself remember to tell you that i loved was when they were kissing in the beginning, and one of them, i cant remember which one, touched the spot where their mouths were joined. i almost fell out of my chair that was so delicious. i mean...just. woah. yeah. THEN the cards were so cute. and DEAN KISSED SAMMYS DIMPLES! not quite dimple porn, but dimple love and i can appreciate that! anyway, this was amazing and i love when you write, and your new story has rocked my socks.
2mjlove1WOW YOU WROTE A STORY! you havent written in sooo long! okay things i loved: the schmoop, first and foremost. and the sex...seriously? SO. HOT. then there was one part i made myself remember to tell you that i loved was when they were kissing in the beginning, and one of them, i cant remember which one, touched the spot where their mouths were joined. i almost fell out of my chair that was so delicious. i mean...just. woah. yeah. THEN the cards were so cute. and DEAN KISSED SAMMYS DIMPLES! not quite dimple porn, but dimple love and i can appreciate that! anyway, this was amazing and i love when you write, and your new story has rocked my socks.
4/22/2012 c1 17SoulfulSam
"Wee-woo, wee-woo..." Do you hear that? That's the sound of the siren from the Schmoop Police coming to take you away. They've found your story and they've broken out the big guns. The love cards, really? That is the schmoopiest (yes, it's a word - I'm claiming it!) idea for a fic that I think I've ever read. Unbelievably schmoopy, but cute. I love it when the boys show each other how much they love one another when they're in the middle of a love-making session. And, yeah, by the way, the sex? So unbelievably hot! Oh. My. God. I just... okay, I need a minute to write up a coherent review to the sex scene, because all I've got right now are hot images of boy lovin' and monosyllabic nonsense words to describe it. You write it so well! I'm always amazed at your ability to write excellent love scenes for these characters, they're always so creative and fun. And, yes, Dean is SO Sam's bitch, but only because he wants to be. He's always been Sam's bitch and they both know it; all Sam's gotta do is break out those big, pretty eyes of his and give Dean that soulful look and Dean's putty in Sam's hands. Of course he is; no one human has the power to overcome that look.
Question: there's a little mention about the monster baby and the fact that he and Sam hadn't been together in months because neither of them was in the "mood" - does this mean that they were together when Dean had sex with that monster chick? Just curious, I wasn't sure if you were making any kind of commitment to their status at the time. Anyway, I'm glad you're writing and thanks for sharing this, baby!
17SoulfulSam"Wee-woo, wee-woo..." Do you hear that? That's the sound of the siren from the Schmoop Police coming to take you away. They've found your story and they've broken out the big guns. The love cards, really? That is the schmoopiest (yes, it's a word - I'm claiming it!) idea for a fic that I think I've ever read. Unbelievably schmoopy, but cute. I love it when the boys show each other how much they love one another when they're in the middle of a love-making session. And, yeah, by the way, the sex? So unbelievably hot! Oh. My. God. I just... okay, I need a minute to write up a coherent review to the sex scene, because all I've got right now are hot images of boy lovin' and monosyllabic nonsense words to describe it. You write it so well! I'm always amazed at your ability to write excellent love scenes for these characters, they're always so creative and fun. And, yes, Dean is SO Sam's bitch, but only because he wants to be. He's always been Sam's bitch and they both know it; all Sam's gotta do is break out those big, pretty eyes of his and give Dean that soulful look and Dean's putty in Sam's hands. Of course he is; no one human has the power to overcome that look.
Question: there's a little mention about the monster baby and the fact that he and Sam hadn't been together in months because neither of them was in the "mood" - does this mean that they were together when Dean had sex with that monster chick? Just curious, I wasn't sure if you were making any kind of commitment to their status at the time. Anyway, I'm glad you're writing and thanks for sharing this, baby!
4/22/2012 c1 4Aishiteru Koinu
I absolutely adored this one-shot as a Christmas Wincest special. The idea of the cards was priceless as well and the smut as well as their character was perfect and true. Thank you for sharing your creative writing and making one hell of a good one-shot wincest story.
4Aishiteru KoinuI absolutely adored this one-shot as a Christmas Wincest special. The idea of the cards was priceless as well and the smut as well as their character was perfect and true. Thank you for sharing your creative writing and making one hell of a good one-shot wincest story.
4/22/2012 c1 PLEASEDELETE20220202020202
I 'm having difficulty trying to absorb what I just read. This was so amazing. I went through a rollercoaster of emotions. The cards were such a good idea. Very touching and humorous. And I bow down to the shmoop. The sex and the kisses were so shmoopy and hot I cant contain myself. Definitely one of my favorites. I have to reread this later. Thank you for this ! Oh, how I love these brothers..
I 'm having difficulty trying to absorb what I just read. This was so amazing. I went through a rollercoaster of emotions. The cards were such a good idea. Very touching and humorous. And I bow down to the shmoop. The sex and the kisses were so shmoopy and hot I cant contain myself. Definitely one of my favorites. I have to reread this later. Thank you for this ! Oh, how I love these brothers..
4/22/2012 c1 kjdw
Absolutely positively wonderful!
Wow! I really really like this!
I don't think I can write a coherent review because all I can think is WOW!
Absolutely positively wonderful!
Wow! I really really like this!
I don't think I can write a coherent review because all I can think is WOW!