for Wisp8/10/2019 c20 Itzrenaynay
Reading that it made me feel ghost pains even though I’ve never had any of that shit done to me before but like I am cringing so hard because that shits fucked up and she’s like a child even though she physically is 20 probably like I don’t know how Bad it was for her or like when they even started raping her it’s just fucking crazy
Reading that it made me feel ghost pains even though I’ve never had any of that shit done to me before but like I am cringing so hard because that shits fucked up and she’s like a child even though she physically is 20 probably like I don’t know how Bad it was for her or like when they even started raping her it’s just fucking crazy
8/9/2019 c15 Itzrenaynay
Damn I was right that’s fucked
Poor cat tho
She reminds me of Lenny only because she doesn’t know better with man handling the kitten
Damn I was right that’s fucked
Poor cat tho
She reminds me of Lenny only because she doesn’t know better with man handling the kitten
8/8/2019 c14 Itzrenaynay
So I’m assuming just gonna put this out there cause I have not read farther than right now. there is a guy or a group of people I’m presuming men that have girls or women that they trained in sort of a way that you would a pet and treat them like absolutely nothing like why would anyone want that
So I’m assuming just gonna put this out there cause I have not read farther than right now. there is a guy or a group of people I’m presuming men that have girls or women that they trained in sort of a way that you would a pet and treat them like absolutely nothing like why would anyone want that
8/6/2019 c2 Itzrenaynay
Holy shit
I stop reading because it was hard to get thru
Hopefully I can continue
Stuff like this is triggering
Holy shit
I stop reading because it was hard to get thru
Hopefully I can continue
Stuff like this is triggering
7/28/2019 c63 starhealr549
OMG! I so love this story as it made me cry, laugh out loud and just was so delightful. It's 2019, do you still write.
I hate what others try to do to someone else, steal their life and such but you found a way so this lost girl could finally find herself and mostly be her own woman. What joy and love you have shown through these characters. You are a really good writer and so creative. Ones heart goes out to this Bella as her story unfolds and she finds herself with a truly loving family of good people. This is so much more then just a love story. It is about finding who you are no matter the hardships that transpire in life. But yes love is still there to find as well
Thank you so much for this wonderful story.
An avid reader
Margieann Bell
OMG! I so love this story as it made me cry, laugh out loud and just was so delightful. It's 2019, do you still write.
I hate what others try to do to someone else, steal their life and such but you found a way so this lost girl could finally find herself and mostly be her own woman. What joy and love you have shown through these characters. You are a really good writer and so creative. Ones heart goes out to this Bella as her story unfolds and she finds herself with a truly loving family of good people. This is so much more then just a love story. It is about finding who you are no matter the hardships that transpire in life. But yes love is still there to find as well
Thank you so much for this wonderful story.
An avid reader
Margieann Bell
7/23/2019 c63 
2Clumsy Bedo
While I certainly enjoyed reading this fanfiction, I'm still not entirely happy with it. I loved the characterisation and plot but somehow... I don't know. Edward was a hardcore pushover - which I get, but it was kind of annoying to read at times because he was made to be so good and comforting. It was a little too much for me. He should have been frustrated or annoyed at some points I think. Simply stating how much he loved her and how much he pitied her for her past isn't enough. He didn't hit his own limits after the fellatio thing - at least not hard enough. I just don't think it's too realistic. (and I'm saying this as a person who needs to make people happy who I love and respect even if I have to give up important parts of myself so I guess I have a little experience there) Bella's development was interesting albeit a little fast in the end. I liked her character up until the point with Tanya. Because here's the thing (and I know it's not a popular opinion because it's always got to be EdxBella): this relationship was heavily codependent and unhealthy from this point on. While I get that he's blind up until the leg massage, her therapist was not and she should have stepped in. The concept of boundaries was important only a couple of chapters before that. I think the objectivity and responsible influence of her was kind of dropped in favour of her giving a subtle okay for a future relationship. While it squeezes my stomach uncomfortably to read the last couple chapters about Edward's and Bella's relationship, I'm not completely against it. I just don't think it's realistic (I know that's not the point of fanfiction and that they can go a little out of their way here). And I guess that's was disappointing me here. I loved to read the details and the way things slowly developed naturally and realistically, but the last couple of chapters skipped so many things or speeded them up to an unnatural pace that I just didn't buy into it anymore. I buy that Bella wanted to get better in order to garner all of Edward's attention but I just don't see this happening so fast. This would have taken longer, regardless how smart she is. From barely grasping the concepts of language to speaking fully logical sentences and grasping huge concepts in a matter of a couple of weeks... Yeah I don't see that happening in the real world. But that's just my taste. I love fanfiction that are well thought out which this one is, absolutely. But I need them to stay in the realm of what's really achievable for the characters. I guess I would have loved if their relationship had developed after a year or so after Bella got independent. And I would have been totally okay if they hadn't ended up in a relationship. Because while everyone here seems to hate on Tanya, she was correct in many ways - at least in my opinion. While I always love a hea, it can come in many ways.
Anyway. I loved your style. You made the characters come to life. The plot was original and well thought out up until the end. So keep going! I'm going to check out your other fanfictions. (I did not want to drown this review in negativity, I really enjoyed reading everything up until the Tanya douse of reality.)
2Clumsy BedoWhile I certainly enjoyed reading this fanfiction, I'm still not entirely happy with it. I loved the characterisation and plot but somehow... I don't know. Edward was a hardcore pushover - which I get, but it was kind of annoying to read at times because he was made to be so good and comforting. It was a little too much for me. He should have been frustrated or annoyed at some points I think. Simply stating how much he loved her and how much he pitied her for her past isn't enough. He didn't hit his own limits after the fellatio thing - at least not hard enough. I just don't think it's too realistic. (and I'm saying this as a person who needs to make people happy who I love and respect even if I have to give up important parts of myself so I guess I have a little experience there) Bella's development was interesting albeit a little fast in the end. I liked her character up until the point with Tanya. Because here's the thing (and I know it's not a popular opinion because it's always got to be EdxBella): this relationship was heavily codependent and unhealthy from this point on. While I get that he's blind up until the leg massage, her therapist was not and she should have stepped in. The concept of boundaries was important only a couple of chapters before that. I think the objectivity and responsible influence of her was kind of dropped in favour of her giving a subtle okay for a future relationship. While it squeezes my stomach uncomfortably to read the last couple chapters about Edward's and Bella's relationship, I'm not completely against it. I just don't think it's realistic (I know that's not the point of fanfiction and that they can go a little out of their way here). And I guess that's was disappointing me here. I loved to read the details and the way things slowly developed naturally and realistically, but the last couple of chapters skipped so many things or speeded them up to an unnatural pace that I just didn't buy into it anymore. I buy that Bella wanted to get better in order to garner all of Edward's attention but I just don't see this happening so fast. This would have taken longer, regardless how smart she is. From barely grasping the concepts of language to speaking fully logical sentences and grasping huge concepts in a matter of a couple of weeks... Yeah I don't see that happening in the real world. But that's just my taste. I love fanfiction that are well thought out which this one is, absolutely. But I need them to stay in the realm of what's really achievable for the characters. I guess I would have loved if their relationship had developed after a year or so after Bella got independent. And I would have been totally okay if they hadn't ended up in a relationship. Because while everyone here seems to hate on Tanya, she was correct in many ways - at least in my opinion. While I always love a hea, it can come in many ways.
Anyway. I loved your style. You made the characters come to life. The plot was original and well thought out up until the end. So keep going! I'm going to check out your other fanfictions. (I did not want to drown this review in negativity, I really enjoyed reading everything up until the Tanya douse of reality.)
7/4/2019 c63 cctwilight
Bella really overcame so much. I doubt she would have been able to do so if she hadn't had Edward in her life. I can't believe they decided to not have any children. I would think Bella would have so much love for a baby. This was a wonderful story of courage and love.
Bella really overcame so much. I doubt she would have been able to do so if she hadn't had Edward in her life. I can't believe they decided to not have any children. I would think Bella would have so much love for a baby. This was a wonderful story of courage and love.