for Wisp8/10/2022 c63 
5Shannon Susan32
I completely love your story. I’m a licensed psychologist and everything you underlined is so true. It gutted me in places. The story moved along beautifully. I don’t have the words to describe how amazingly aching this story is. Thank you.
5Shannon Susan32I completely love your story. I’m a licensed psychologist and everything you underlined is so true. It gutted me in places. The story moved along beautifully. I don’t have the words to describe how amazingly aching this story is. Thank you.
8/2/2022 c1 friesforfive
Thank you for sharing your work with us! I really enjoyed the relationship between Pet and Bella
Thank you for sharing your work with us! I really enjoyed the relationship between Pet and Bella
8/2/2022 c48 friesforfive
I know it’s been a hot second but reading your AN for this chapter inclines me to sayhello, I hope you’re doing lovely and well, and thank you for your service in offering these stories to all of us out here in the FF world. Sending much love.
I know it’s been a hot second but reading your AN for this chapter inclines me to sayhello, I hope you’re doing lovely and well, and thank you for your service in offering these stories to all of us out here in the FF world. Sending much love.
6/25/2022 c3 cocoapurl
This is one of the most well-written fanfictions I've read over the years. I'm enjoying it.
This is one of the most well-written fanfictions I've read over the years. I'm enjoying it.
6/25/2022 c2 cocoapurl
I love your writing. It's heartbreaking what she's going through. However, I'm wondering why neither Edward nor Carlisle called the police? The ambulance I can understand because Carlisle's a doctor and he could care for her until she was presentable. But, it seems like the longer they wait the more likely James will be long gone.
I love your writing. It's heartbreaking what she's going through. However, I'm wondering why neither Edward nor Carlisle called the police? The ambulance I can understand because Carlisle's a doctor and he could care for her until she was presentable. But, it seems like the longer they wait the more likely James will be long gone.
5/1/2022 c10 BethMasenCullen
I'm glad Edward brought Wisp back to the cabin, and I'm glad Rose is supporting him. I hope Wisp sleeps and I hope Carlisle isn't too hard on Edward...
I'm glad Edward brought Wisp back to the cabin, and I'm glad Rose is supporting him. I hope Wisp sleeps and I hope Carlisle isn't too hard on Edward...
4/30/2022 c7 BethMasenCullen
I feel awful for what this is doing to Edward, and I am worried about what Wisp's reaction will be later
I feel awful for what this is doing to Edward, and I am worried about what Wisp's reaction will be later
1/23/2022 c63 MissWM
Hmm I think you are a brilliant writer and this plot was so amazingly woven. I loved your Edward, specially at the beginning. Such a beautiful heart. I truly love your Rose and Esme was a sweetheart. Emily and Garret, though, they are 2 of my favorite characters here.
Garret was such a sweet sweet person. He had no emotional obligation to Edward or Bella, but he dealt with her in such a caring, human way. I'm still speechless by his actions, his enthusiasm and the way he treated Bella. I imagine working as a sketch artist he would deal with lots of people and see lots of tragic things, to keep his gentle soul throughout it is something to be applauded. You did an amazing job with him
The thing where Felix was not found- although not happy about it, it felt really. We do know not always the bad guys are apprehended.
And to think this all started because of a game of poker hahah
I did not like at all, though, the romantic turn this whole story took. I wanted to like it. But as I read and read more, it feels awful.
I am not even a bit comfortable with the romantic twist this took. I can't even say much about it. He bathed her like a baby. He took in a paternal role, providing a home, (blurred) boundaries and confort. It is just wrong for it to evolve to something romantic and sexual. I'd love for her to find a partner, a romantic interest, but not someone who is a caregiver. How can she differentiate? How can they be equals? This is the one thing I'm shocked Emily did not oppose to (it even felt like she encouraged it a bit). I don't think that was her being a good therapist
Neither was I confortable with bella's miracle and sudden improvement from someone learning about speech to a fully articulated person, who could voice her needs, want and feelings in such a educated way. Seriously, you took so much time with her physical limitations, with baby steps to just rollercoast it at the end
So yeah, these are my thoughts on this.
Thanks for sharing.
Hmm I think you are a brilliant writer and this plot was so amazingly woven. I loved your Edward, specially at the beginning. Such a beautiful heart. I truly love your Rose and Esme was a sweetheart. Emily and Garret, though, they are 2 of my favorite characters here.
Garret was such a sweet sweet person. He had no emotional obligation to Edward or Bella, but he dealt with her in such a caring, human way. I'm still speechless by his actions, his enthusiasm and the way he treated Bella. I imagine working as a sketch artist he would deal with lots of people and see lots of tragic things, to keep his gentle soul throughout it is something to be applauded. You did an amazing job with him
The thing where Felix was not found- although not happy about it, it felt really. We do know not always the bad guys are apprehended.
And to think this all started because of a game of poker hahah
I did not like at all, though, the romantic turn this whole story took. I wanted to like it. But as I read and read more, it feels awful.
I am not even a bit comfortable with the romantic twist this took. I can't even say much about it. He bathed her like a baby. He took in a paternal role, providing a home, (blurred) boundaries and confort. It is just wrong for it to evolve to something romantic and sexual. I'd love for her to find a partner, a romantic interest, but not someone who is a caregiver. How can she differentiate? How can they be equals? This is the one thing I'm shocked Emily did not oppose to (it even felt like she encouraged it a bit). I don't think that was her being a good therapist
Neither was I confortable with bella's miracle and sudden improvement from someone learning about speech to a fully articulated person, who could voice her needs, want and feelings in such a educated way. Seriously, you took so much time with her physical limitations, with baby steps to just rollercoast it at the end
So yeah, these are my thoughts on this.
Thanks for sharing.
1/23/2022 c59 MissWM
Hmm I don't know what to say about this transition from barely-talking-child Wisp to mature-talking Bella. The massage scene was a bit creepy.
This felt rushed.
No one learns to talk and articulate their thoughts so well in a matter of weeks. Of course, her concerns about edward loving tanya more than her are more than justified. But the way this has been articulated does not feel natural. I mean, her development so far felt natural, but not this. It's like going from 8 to 80 without foundation
Hmm I don't know what to say about this transition from barely-talking-child Wisp to mature-talking Bella. The massage scene was a bit creepy.
This felt rushed.
No one learns to talk and articulate their thoughts so well in a matter of weeks. Of course, her concerns about edward loving tanya more than her are more than justified. But the way this has been articulated does not feel natural. I mean, her development so far felt natural, but not this. It's like going from 8 to 80 without foundation