for Wisp10/28/2021 c52 
4AlexandraaCullen
I definitely feel Emmett was a conflict of interest this entire time. It seems terribly wrong for him to interrogate Edward, his best friend as a suspect for murder! I’m surprised he was allowed to do that. I feel bad for edward, this entire situation looks bad even though he is completely innocent in all this
4AlexandraaCullenI definitely feel Emmett was a conflict of interest this entire time. It seems terribly wrong for him to interrogate Edward, his best friend as a suspect for murder! I’m surprised he was allowed to do that. I feel bad for edward, this entire situation looks bad even though he is completely innocent in all this
10/27/2021 c46 AlexandraaCullen
I am so hooked on this story that I stayed up late on a week night and will be tired if I don’t go to bed now lol! It’s hard to put this fic down, I am so captivated by your plot and your writing!
I am so hooked on this story that I stayed up late on a week night and will be tired if I don’t go to bed now lol! It’s hard to put this fic down, I am so captivated by your plot and your writing!
10/27/2021 c45 AlexandraaCullen
Yikes! Seemed like Edward was right about not putting out pictures of wisp to the public since it seems like Gerandy fled like he knew the police were onto him
Yikes! Seemed like Edward was right about not putting out pictures of wisp to the public since it seems like Gerandy fled like he knew the police were onto him
10/27/2021 c41 AlexandraaCullen
Hopefully this is the tip they need to help move the investigation along!
Hopefully this is the tip they need to help move the investigation along!
10/26/2021 c16 AlexandraaCullen
This is absolutely heartbreaking. I had no idea the kind of story this would turn out to be but I am glad (maybe glad is the wrong word for such a traumatic story) I started reading it. It’s well written, so sad and unfortunately situations like this happen to real life people and it’s heartbreaking to read about
This is absolutely heartbreaking. I had no idea the kind of story this would turn out to be but I am glad (maybe glad is the wrong word for such a traumatic story) I started reading it. It’s well written, so sad and unfortunately situations like this happen to real life people and it’s heartbreaking to read about
8/20/2021 c1 Pattigirl23
Yes! This story was really amazing, so well written, you have a lot of talent... I loved everything.. Thank you for sharing with us
Yes! This story was really amazing, so well written, you have a lot of talent... I loved everything.. Thank you for sharing with us
7/18/2021 c63 happyhollie
Wow I just came across this story and absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us. I would love if you would consider writing other future takes, particularly how Edward and Wisp dealt with their first sexual experience together. Thanks so much again.
Wow I just came across this story and absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us. I would love if you would consider writing other future takes, particularly how Edward and Wisp dealt with their first sexual experience together. Thanks so much again.
7/11/2021 c63 lawshark
Love this story! It’s the third time I’ve read it! It’s so well written and I also really like that the ending isn’t overly perfect (marriage, kids, etc.) - it would be so unrealistic to think that the past would ever totally disappear for Bella/Wisp. Too many fanfics with tough subject matters have unrealistic happy endings - here we have a very happy ending but still rooted with some recognition that no one could ever truly get over that past. Any chance of another future take?
Love this story! It’s the third time I’ve read it! It’s so well written and I also really like that the ending isn’t overly perfect (marriage, kids, etc.) - it would be so unrealistic to think that the past would ever totally disappear for Bella/Wisp. Too many fanfics with tough subject matters have unrealistic happy endings - here we have a very happy ending but still rooted with some recognition that no one could ever truly get over that past. Any chance of another future take?
6/18/2021 c63 i heart clash
Holy crap! “Page turner,” tear jerker, I couldn’t stop reading once I’d started! So much heart! I adored your character renderings and your story telling. Thank you for this wonderful wonderful read 3
Holy crap! “Page turner,” tear jerker, I couldn’t stop reading once I’d started! So much heart! I adored your character renderings and your story telling. Thank you for this wonderful wonderful read 3
4/30/2021 c59 1Premti
Hey,
Isnt this story something like edward imprinting on bella and being whatever she needs him to be. Human version of it. Did the author write it like that?
1PremtiHey,
Isnt this story something like edward imprinting on bella and being whatever she needs him to be. Human version of it. Did the author write it like that?
4/25/2021 c63 Toni Masen
WOW! What a totally enthralling story that had me so gripped I only had about 3 hours sleep last night before I had to get up for work! LOL but I managed. LOL. I must admit that when Bella had first been found and Edward kept going on and on about how he needed to look after her and how frail she was etc it was getting irritating, so when Edward was ill and literally out of it for a few days I found his silence to be most refreshing LOLLLLLLL. Fantastic story, well done. :-)
WOW! What a totally enthralling story that had me so gripped I only had about 3 hours sleep last night before I had to get up for work! LOL but I managed. LOL. I must admit that when Bella had first been found and Edward kept going on and on about how he needed to look after her and how frail she was etc it was getting irritating, so when Edward was ill and literally out of it for a few days I found his silence to be most refreshing LOLLLLLLL. Fantastic story, well done. :-)