for Wisp5/5/2020 c1 Scribner's2328
Hi! I found this from having read Torn - I'm sure you know that Dooba named Bella's kitten Wisp, and she said where it came from. For this first chapter, I am mostly happy and grateful that you can write, and write well. I'm super picky, and while many stories here have great plots, I get distracted and frustrated when the writing itself is poor. I like angsty stories as well, so I am looking forward to this one. And I have a feeling that the dead body in the back isn't quite dead :)
Hi! I found this from having read Torn - I'm sure you know that Dooba named Bella's kitten Wisp, and she said where it came from. For this first chapter, I am mostly happy and grateful that you can write, and write well. I'm super picky, and while many stories here have great plots, I get distracted and frustrated when the writing itself is poor. I like angsty stories as well, so I am looking forward to this one. And I have a feeling that the dead body in the back isn't quite dead :)
4/17/2020 c51 BurtonM1927
WTG getting rid of negative people. Whoo hooo
WTG getting rid of negative people. Whoo hooo
4/17/2020 c48 BurtonM1927
Cris,
You are strong capable woman. You bravely are acknowledging your depression and anxiety.
From my own experience, it has lightened my burdens sharing my fears, nightmares, depression with loved ones. My issues have not gone away but are more easily handled when I can sometimes share with those I trust to love me and to not feel judged.
I trust you will continue your growing and wish you love and joy.
Cris,
You are strong capable woman. You bravely are acknowledging your depression and anxiety.
From my own experience, it has lightened my burdens sharing my fears, nightmares, depression with loved ones. My issues have not gone away but are more easily handled when I can sometimes share with those I trust to love me and to not feel judged.
I trust you will continue your growing and wish you love and joy.
4/17/2020 c47 BurtonM1927
Riveting story, well written. A shining example of family love and the power to heal.
Riveting story, well written. A shining example of family love and the power to heal.
4/13/2020 c39 Lunawolf09
I'm so glad that you found Pet and that Wisp, Isabella, or Bella whatever you want to call her is learning new words and do NOT lose Pet again.
I'm so glad that you found Pet and that Wisp, Isabella, or Bella whatever you want to call her is learning new words and do NOT lose Pet again.
4/13/2020 c37 Lunawolf09
plz find Pet 2 help Wisp or Isabella or Bella whatever u want 2 call her plz find the kitty
plz find Pet 2 help Wisp or Isabella or Bella whatever u want 2 call her plz find the kitty
3/28/2020 c63 I love Wisp
Hi, I love this story so much. Wisp is one of my favorite Bellas ever. EVER. I hope someday you'll write more about this B&E and how their romantic relationship progresses! Stay safe and healthy 3
Hi, I love this story so much. Wisp is one of my favorite Bellas ever. EVER. I hope someday you'll write more about this B&E and how their romantic relationship progresses! Stay safe and healthy 3
3/27/2020 c41 emma
hola soy de mexico acabo de descubrir tu historia gracias a un grupo de facebook llamado elitefanfiction
y simplemente no e parado de leerlo llevo leyéndolo solo una semana y ya voy en el capitulo 41 así de atrapada estoy tienes talento cariño no te detengas.
hola soy de mexico acabo de descubrir tu historia gracias a un grupo de facebook llamado elitefanfiction
y simplemente no e parado de leerlo llevo leyéndolo solo una semana y ya voy en el capitulo 41 así de atrapada estoy tienes talento cariño no te detengas.
3/24/2020 c63 BereB
I loved this story. the way you developed it is incredible.
I hated what Tanya did just out of spite, in my opinion, and that Felix was not found.
I am from Argentina, so I feel the faults.
regards
I loved this story. the way you developed it is incredible.
I hated what Tanya did just out of spite, in my opinion, and that Felix was not found.
I am from Argentina, so I feel the faults.
regards
3/20/2020 c1 BereB
OMG! I just found this story, I read only the first chapter but it already caught me. thanks for writing it
OMG! I just found this story, I read only the first chapter but it already caught me. thanks for writing it
1511/29/2019 c2 Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon
first off emergency services should have been called immediately, to not do so is asinine.
first off emergency services should have been called immediately, to not do so is asinine.