for Wisp10/24/2019 c63 Guest
This is the first story that I was not a fan of Edward and Bella. Realistically a relationship between Edward and Emily would have been better. Overall a good story
This is the first story that I was not a fan of Edward and Bella. Realistically a relationship between Edward and Emily would have been better. Overall a good story
10/12/2019 c1 
3abbyweyr
You might like Sins of Piano Man by Solareclispse and Pinned but Fluttering by CassandraLowery and Vampire in the Basement by Michellephants. Good start to this story.
3abbyweyrYou might like Sins of Piano Man by Solareclispse and Pinned but Fluttering by CassandraLowery and Vampire in the Basement by Michellephants. Good start to this story.
10/3/2019 c63 Guest
Really amazing and so very beautiful. You are absolutely talented out of this world. Love your stories. Peace.
Really amazing and so very beautiful. You are absolutely talented out of this world. Love your stories. Peace.
9/5/2019 c63 3Sam 'Dimples' Swarek
I can’t tell u how much I loved this story. There are no clear words to describe it. Just know that it truly touched me. Thank you for doing this story
3Sam 'Dimples' SwarekI can’t tell u how much I loved this story. There are no clear words to describe it. Just know that it truly touched me. Thank you for doing this story
9/4/2019 c54 Sam 'Dimples' Swarek
I love this story but Tanya needs to f**k off. She hasn’t even thought of how things are with wisp. She just sees an adult trying to take her Edward, who isn’t hers anymore. Edward needs to get rid. She is annoying me already. Lol
I love this story but Tanya needs to f**k off. She hasn’t even thought of how things are with wisp. She just sees an adult trying to take her Edward, who isn’t hers anymore. Edward needs to get rid. She is annoying me already. Lol
8/13/2019 c63 Itzrenaynay
I understand all the reasonings behind Bella not doing certain things but it’s only been a year and a half like she’s like what 22-23 now like she has her whole life to decide if she wants to marry or have actual children and if not she can always adopt like there’s nothing wrong with that
I understand all the reasonings behind Bella not doing certain things but it’s only been a year and a half like she’s like what 22-23 now like she has her whole life to decide if she wants to marry or have actual children and if not she can always adopt like there’s nothing wrong with that
8/12/2019 c55 Itzrenaynay
First of all that’s fucking gross like he knows that sex is really taboo for her and yet he does it in the bed room right next to where she sleeps like what the fuck is wrong with him yeah like it’s totally OK and normal to have like sex with someone right next to a rape victim I’m like wtf you dumb motherfucker like I don’t understand why you thought It was OK like is he really that stupid
First of all that’s fucking gross like he knows that sex is really taboo for her and yet he does it in the bed room right next to where she sleeps like what the fuck is wrong with him yeah like it’s totally OK and normal to have like sex with someone right next to a rape victim I’m like wtf you dumb motherfucker like I don’t understand why you thought It was OK like is he really that stupid
8/12/2019 c54 Itzrenaynay
OK so first of all she isn’t really wrong but second of all she’s such a stupid bitch because for her to be jealous is like so dumb
Like if wisp wasn’t in the picture and he was still with Tanya and they had a kid and their daughter or whatever only liked Edward would she be threatened by her like this sounds fucking dumb
OK so first of all she isn’t really wrong but second of all she’s such a stupid bitch because for her to be jealous is like so dumb
Like if wisp wasn’t in the picture and he was still with Tanya and they had a kid and their daughter or whatever only liked Edward would she be threatened by her like this sounds fucking dumb
8/12/2019 c53 Itzrenaynay
I’m suspicious of Tanya
Only because I think she’s a slut but she probably isn’t One I know wisps not gonna be
I’m suspicious of Tanya
Only because I think she’s a slut but she probably isn’t One I know wisps not gonna be