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3/11/2020 c1 EmbracingWhimsy
Re:Bohogal1998. Don't waste your precious time reading these mediocre works from an author who doesn't respect others. Give that review love to authors who put in the time and effort to post works for you AND follows the site rules by respecting reviewers etc.

She bullies others who have different viewpoints 't support a well known fandom bully in the NCIS fandom. She's made the environment over there so toxic reviewers are afraid to post on other writers fics after the way she's responded to their reviews. This is so unfair on the rest of us.

Be part of the solution not the problem.
9/30/2019 c1 3DawnSumner000
This was so sweet. :)
9/20/2019 c1 G0NEG1RL
For a long time, I thought Emily would end up with Morgan (think about it, her boyfriend Mark, in London and Andrew, in D.C. both resemble Derek), but Reid? No.
Also, I can't see Emily wearing flannel to bed, or blushing, for that matter.
5/6/2019 c1 26NavySailor
I love this! Saw you'd written and just had to stop by and read it! Keep up the writing, you're doing great. This story is amazing!
12/22/2017 c1 144Mislav
Really cute and fun story. You captured Emily's character and described her thoughts and feelings very well. The tension and mystery throughout the story were also pretty good. I really liked the reveal that it was Spencer, they'd make a cute couple. I suspected it but wasn't sure. Really well done.
10/30/2016 c1 5CM4LIFE-BG
omg i loved it i cant believe the team dosen't know. you should contiue to write you are a great writer.
1/18/2016 c1 Guest
SO sweet. This is such a nice pairing.
8/23/2013 c1 Criminal-Minds-superfan
I didn't like the pairing! Why would Reid go for someone so old. I mean I personally dont like thw pairing I think its disturbing. U think it should have been Derek.! I just don't Reid would go out with someone that much older than him!
6/4/2013 c1 8QweenGwen
The story idea was great. I loved Emily, sad she is gone. You have a way with writing but sometimes it got a little choppy, like you were thinking something but didn't write it out fully. I do that all the time :) Sometimes we think more than we can write. :) Another quick fix would be formating, just little things like line breaks or bolding author's note.

Seriously though, great story. Can't wait for you to write others.

Qgwen
5/18/2013 c1 39Susie G
This was totally awesome and I so did not know it was Reid until you mentioned the purple scarf. Well written and I love the mystery in it! Good job!
5/8/2013 c1 15Muffin's Lilac
Aw, how cute.
12/27/2012 c1 tannerose5
This goes out to "Guest 12/27/12. "
Let me try to explain a couple of comments.
Emily is going home alone because she and Reid hadn't told anyone they were married. They were meeting the team for breakfast the next day to tell them everything.
The story stated that they have been secretly dating. Reid and Emily had eloped, but David was the only one who knew. He was their witness at city hall.
Emily never enjoyed her life with her mother and father.
I thank you for reading my one-shot. I love these two together, but knew TPTB would never put them together, so I did.
12/27/2012 c1 Guest
This is a good attempt but slightly confusing...I didn't understand why it said Emily was going home alone and she was happy with her family when apparently she has a boyfriend and she's not happy with her family? I like the idea though! Suggestion: you should take a writing class or make your story a little easier to understand. I enjoyed reading it though
9/15/2012 c1 3RU12
Could you continue please? Love it so far. :)
7/15/2012 c1 122dustytiger
awww wow that was awesome! i loved it... how did i miss this? ack! loved it tho... hhe what a good reason for her to have leave the team... being married to reid and having a little baby genius squee!
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