
5/8/2015 c1 Guest
I think something like this ha
I think something like this ha
5/3/2012 c1 lkejrlkejoiw4ur43957409uoiefj
I would like you to redo this actually. It happened a little fast but u could really make a good story out of this if you slow it down a bit! Please write more!
I would like you to redo this actually. It happened a little fast but u could really make a good story out of this if you slow it down a bit! Please write more!
4/29/2012 c1 Kari
AWWWW that was such a good story you should cont. it i loved it it was a good little love story that needs to cont..
AWWWW that was such a good story you should cont. it i loved it it was a good little love story that needs to cont..
4/25/2012 c1 Hoshino820
Aww~~ so touching when sasuke wrote that note :)
I wanna see the sequel if there is gonna be one. What would happen to Sakura if Sasuke attacks Konoha?
I enjoyed reading your story (^。^)
Aww~~ so touching when sasuke wrote that note :)
I wanna see the sequel if there is gonna be one. What would happen to Sakura if Sasuke attacks Konoha?
I enjoyed reading your story (^。^)
4/24/2012 c1 SorryLoveButIDon'tReallyCare
It's soo cute! You should make a sequeal! I think it could be cute to play with the picture as a sequal!
It's soo cute! You should make a sequeal! I think it could be cute to play with the picture as a sequal!
4/24/2012 c1
64Tiger Priestess
Hmmm...you could continue this story...It doesn't have to be a whole bunch of chapters but enough to let the readers know what happened after Sasuke attacks the Leaf, or if he does at all, or if something else happens...
Very few typos that I could see, so your grammar is pretty good.

Hmmm...you could continue this story...It doesn't have to be a whole bunch of chapters but enough to let the readers know what happened after Sasuke attacks the Leaf, or if he does at all, or if something else happens...
Very few typos that I could see, so your grammar is pretty good.
4/24/2012 c1 Guest
Kkaaa I loved it loved it! :) please make a sequel, I nees to know what happens! I hope the picture is replaced with a picture of sasuke, sakura, and their child :D
Kkaaa I loved it loved it! :) please make a sequel, I nees to know what happens! I hope the picture is replaced with a picture of sasuke, sakura, and their child :D