
2/9/2013 c5 Guest
OMG! They finally meet!
OMG! They finally meet!
1/22/2013 c4 Guest
I love this story please update I no it's hard but u havnt done it for months
I love this story please update I no it's hard but u havnt done it for months
8/29/2012 c4 Guest
This is really, really good! The plot makes sense, which is great! Update soon please!
This is really, really good! The plot makes sense, which is great! Update soon please!
8/14/2012 c4 ladora
Bahaha I do like how you inserted Adrian into this story, even if it's only by name, clever!
As always, I look forward to reading what comes next.
Bahaha I do like how you inserted Adrian into this story, even if it's only by name, clever!
As always, I look forward to reading what comes next.
8/14/2012 c4
6Mori Hathaway
I'm taking you up on that promise I thought you weren't coming back and that I would never read how the story went on ;( glad you post it!
Ps: I hate Tasha .

I'm taking you up on that promise I thought you weren't coming back and that I would never read how the story went on ;( glad you post it!
Ps: I hate Tasha .
8/14/2012 c4 Guest
Quikly update
Quikly update
8/14/2012 c4 hilda0829
LOVE IT! Omg update soon please!
LOVE IT! Omg update soon please!
8/14/2012 c4 Dimka's chick
Omg, this was so sad! I how at least that he doesn't sleep with her, how did he get so comfortable in his new life so quick?
Omg, this was so sad! I how at least that he doesn't sleep with her, how did he get so comfortable in his new life so quick?
8/13/2012 c3 Guest
What a long UD :(
What a long UD :(
7/5/2012 c1 Guest
Hi, Love what's going. Keep going. :D
Hi, Love what's going. Keep going. :D
7/3/2012 c3 ladora
I think it should be something at least vaguely Russian, or a name that's used in Russia, like Maksim, Erik or Ivan. Even if he's lost his memories, he should've retained his native language (assuming he's still Russian in your story), and it's hard to make a name like 'Justin' seem believable when he's 6' 7" with a Russian accent. Maksim's my favorite, and it apparently means 'the greatest' which I think most readers can agree, he IS.
I so do enjoy your writing; it's very compelling and I look forward to the next chapter.
I think it should be something at least vaguely Russian, or a name that's used in Russia, like Maksim, Erik or Ivan. Even if he's lost his memories, he should've retained his native language (assuming he's still Russian in your story), and it's hard to make a name like 'Justin' seem believable when he's 6' 7" with a Russian accent. Maksim's my favorite, and it apparently means 'the greatest' which I think most readers can agree, he IS.
I so do enjoy your writing; it's very compelling and I look forward to the next chapter.
6/28/2012 c3 Delete.Gone.Forever
I like your writing style. There's enough detail where it's needed and there's actual real emotion between the characters. This is a great story and I'm glad I came across this one.
I like your writing style. There's enough detail where it's needed and there's actual real emotion between the characters. This is a great story and I'm glad I came across this one.