for Naruto Legend of the Triforce1/14/2018 c1 Guest
Well...that was a crappy way to die for someone like Link...
Well...that was a crappy way to die for someone like Link...
4/14/2013 c5 
4FantomeDePapier
So... I've read until chapter 5 so far. I think the story is good itself and has a great potential. But I think you should really consider having someone to check your redaction (maybe ask a beta reader to do it?).
No offense, but sometimes I've had to reread some paragraphs because there were punctuation marks missing and that makes it a little difficult to read.
Other than that the story has been good, so I hope you don't take the comment badly
4FantomeDePapierSo... I've read until chapter 5 so far. I think the story is good itself and has a great potential. But I think you should really consider having someone to check your redaction (maybe ask a beta reader to do it?).
No offense, but sometimes I've had to reread some paragraphs because there were punctuation marks missing and that makes it a little difficult to read.
Other than that the story has been good, so I hope you don't take the comment badly
3/12/2013 c9 24thedarkpokemaster
dame not bad I can see Hinata and Kakashi have shown up I know it will be cool.
24thedarkpokemasterdame not bad I can see Hinata and Kakashi have shown up I know it will be cool.
3/10/2013 c9 Guest
is this link dark link or is link realy evil in this?
is this link dark link or is link realy evil in this?
3/10/2013 c3 Guest
Good story so far(I'm on chapter 3)main thing I find lacking is your quotation marks placement
Good story so far(I'm on chapter 3)main thing I find lacking is your quotation marks placement
3/5/2013 c7 Guest
Good story but should be in the crossover section not general.
Good story but should be in the crossover section not general.
3/5/2013 c9 5kidloco
you know i can wait, i had the same problem
(mostly i back to my computer and here dont had docx, so cant write and dont want write in the other computer XD or copy paste in old .doc so :p narusaku will wait alittle more.. anyway im changing againg some part of i had write already :p)
5kidlocoyou know i can wait, i had the same problem
(mostly i back to my computer and here dont had docx, so cant write and dont want write in the other computer XD or copy paste in old .doc so :p narusaku will wait alittle more.. anyway im changing againg some part of i had write already :p)