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7/9/2020 c1 Guest
Barry god
8/31/2014 c1 m
triste !
9/16/2013 c1 m
si triste ! j'ai pleuré a la fin ! c'est terrible !
3/26/2013 c1 show me a good time
... i actually cried. Over two krill, non the less... I think you did a really good job.
3/12/2013 c1 Guest
terriblement triste
6/7/2012 c1 56Snowflake Archive
Once again, you have written another tragic story about Bill and Will, though the death roles this time are reversed. There were less sentence errors here, but a couple of mistakes, such as “…and his his body floated away from the swarm all was quiet.” I love the Dr. Phil reference too. -

*S. Snowflake
5/21/2012 c1 MyWayWriter
Extremely depressing that was, but still good. I like how Bill and Will are such close friends that they can't live without each other, that's strong message. I just hope no one think you implied that they're gay.
5/21/2012 c1 MyWayWriter
Extremely depressing that was, but still good. I like how Bill and Will are such close friends that they can't live without each other, that's strong message. I just hope no one think you implied that they're gay.

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