
5/15/2013 c3
2LonelyHollow117
Really like this fanfiction and I think Ichigo's wife sucks. Orihime should be with him. But that's just my opinion. Like the plot and I didn't see anything wrong. Great story and I can't wait to read more!

Really like this fanfiction and I think Ichigo's wife sucks. Orihime should be with him. But that's just my opinion. Like the plot and I didn't see anything wrong. Great story and I can't wait to read more!
5/14/2013 c3 Hearts Grow
In the second chapter I kind of figured Mulan was having and affair haha. Damn she is chill haha
Well update soon
In the second chapter I kind of figured Mulan was having and affair haha. Damn she is chill haha
Well update soon
5/14/2013 c2 Hearts Grow
Haha Mulan seems pretty chill but at the same time uptight haha weird combination
Haha Mulan seems pretty chill but at the same time uptight haha weird combination
5/13/2013 c3 QueenBlade
Beau chapitre le scénario de la plage a été rajouté non ? J'aime bien. Met à jour bientôt
Beau chapitre le scénario de la plage a été rajouté non ? J'aime bien. Met à jour bientôt
9/24/2012 c1
6zodious
Don't worry you're getting better! Trust me when I first started writing fan fiction specifically bleach at the age of 14 I totally sucked! And I think you're doing a better job than me by far. So just continue to practice and as always you'll continue to get better and better. Update soon btw!:D

Don't worry you're getting better! Trust me when I first started writing fan fiction specifically bleach at the age of 14 I totally sucked! And I think you're doing a better job than me by far. So just continue to practice and as always you'll continue to get better and better. Update soon btw!:D
9/24/2012 c2 zodious
Lol Renji is to much tehehehe! Nice chappie. Where's your update Buster! *angry face*...:)
Lol Renji is to much tehehehe! Nice chappie. Where's your update Buster! *angry face*...:)
9/16/2012 c2 QueenBlade
c'était bien. Continue j'attend que les évènements avance encore un peu. Met à jour bientôt ;)
c'était bien. Continue j'attend que les évènements avance encore un peu. Met à jour bientôt ;)
4/26/2012 c1 QueenBlade
Cette version commence plus directement que l'autre (je parle de l'entretien d'embauche). J'attend la suite avec impatience afin de voir les détails ajoutés et ceux persistants.;)
Cette version commence plus directement que l'autre (je parle de l'entretien d'embauche). J'attend la suite avec impatience afin de voir les détails ajoutés et ceux persistants.;)
4/26/2012 c1 citew32
I like this version more :) Plz update soon can't wait to read more ^^
I like this version more :) Plz update soon can't wait to read more ^^