for Earthquake reflections5/10/2017 c4 flutterbye52000
It's been such a long time since you wrote this fantastic unfinished story, and I know you may not want to bother returning to it, but you have so many fans who love you and this story, and wish with all their hearts that you'd return to it. I can't stop thinking about it, wondering how Gibbs is doing and how he is found. Please return to us and this fabulous creation and continue to honour us with your talent...I truly mean that. We love you, hslacer.
It's been such a long time since you wrote this fantastic unfinished story, and I know you may not want to bother returning to it, but you have so many fans who love you and this story, and wish with all their hearts that you'd return to it. I can't stop thinking about it, wondering how Gibbs is doing and how he is found. Please return to us and this fabulous creation and continue to honour us with your talent...I truly mean that. We love you, hslacer.
12/2/2015 c1 ladyaloysius
Cool story! I really like the set up to the story! If you don't mind, there are a couple of words I'd like to ask you to change: Marine Corps, Naval Yard. Thought you would like the correct spelling of the words. Happy writing!
Cool story! I really like the set up to the story! If you don't mind, there are a couple of words I'd like to ask you to change: Marine Corps, Naval Yard. Thought you would like the correct spelling of the words. Happy writing!
11/10/2013 c4 
7Gibbs17
I like your interpretation of how Gibbs and Abby met, it's a different take on the start of Gibbs' team.
7Gibbs17I like your interpretation of how Gibbs and Abby met, it's a different take on the start of Gibbs' team.
4/6/2013 c4 Ladyaloysius
I love this version of the story of Gibbs life!
I love this version of the story of Gibbs life!
4/6/2013 c2 Ladyaloysius
It is great sofar! Hope you are writing on Kindred Spirits, too!
It is great sofar! Hope you are writing on Kindred Spirits, too!
6/13/2012 c4 43The Fictionist Aura
Brilliant story, honestly. Original setting and good flashbacks. Love it.
43The Fictionist AuraBrilliant story, honestly. Original setting and good flashbacks. Love it.
5/30/2012 c4 6ZDaizy
I really like this story! Some of your ideas are underdeveloped, though, so you need to take your stories into their full potential. Other than that, it's great :)
6ZDaizyI really like this story! Some of your ideas are underdeveloped, though, so you need to take your stories into their full potential. Other than that, it's great :)
4/26/2012 c1 170hippiechick2112
other than a few grammatical errors, it's really good. :D cannot wait for the next chapter!
170hippiechick2112other than a few grammatical errors, it's really good. :D cannot wait for the next chapter!