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2/10/2017 c2 YveltalZekrom
Why did you go from (not-so) perfectly good standard dialogue with quotation marks to rp log/play/movie script form?
6/3/2016 c2 bearfan23
I'd like to offer up a blader and bey
3/13/2015 c1 Guest
I'm making one in the new future a story with Naruto and beyblade because I see a lot of potential in this keep on and maybe we can see who finishes theirs first. Good Luck ; )
5/5/2013 c1 Cherie
Upon reading this. You have a lot of work ahead of you, especially the spelling and grammar mistakes. It might be easier if you read more stories and keep writing, you'll get better. And..Naruto cross over with beyblade? Not a very good one. But that's my opinion. Keep writing.
10/3/2012 c2 ssjzohan
Hey do u need ocs and this seems awesome pm if u can and update
9/8/2012 c2 28subterra59
I got a character for you pm you in a sec
7/30/2012 c2 JJP123
if you need a idea for a couple i favor for naruto x hikaru that dark skin blue haired girl with the bay aquario
7/27/2012 c1 faka
compose another
6/18/2012 c1 darrenk100
not much plot it is just bacicly a summery nedds work
4/27/2012 c1 Buttercupx102
Its good! keep writing i want to know whats gonna happen! :)

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