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1/1/2013 c1 Guest
Allan is a stupid fucking freak. His bitch ass whinyness and freak mind are annoying

He treats all his friends like shit when he's angry,
4/30/2012 c1 4Era-Basilisk
Okay... Since people don't know who Allan is, I don't think this should be a one shot, but since this is an apology fic... Oh well
4/29/2012 c1 Chin Suginei
Ah... well... I guess the ending was kind of... weird. Since the name "Allan" just popped out of no where.

but I liked the middle part :) Very good!
4/27/2012 c1 Bobkitty
You suck at writing.
4/27/2012 c1 22Ou Matsurei
._."" Not that I didn't like it... but I found it kind of crappy, no offense. I mean... people don't know who Allan is ^^"" But it was a good one since you pulled that out right after some kind of disagreement with Allan XD

Oh, and it's "Taiyou" :P Don't forget the u~
4/27/2012 c1 Miley karamen
Lol dude you did a good job
4/27/2012 c1 10deletedCS
Hurr, there's room for improvement, but it's an apology fic, so...

Anyways, a bit more description here and there, and try to make the summary a bit more appealing to other people and not just Allan Takuto.

Hope this helped,

~res-tan
4/27/2012 c1 17Monolaymoo
Hoo boy...I hope you guys make up soon.
4/27/2012 c1 MasakiHikaru
*spits out my tea*...im shock u did this for him...let alone its Allan..my Ex...

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