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7/30/2012 c1 cat-in-narnia
Well first off I loved the feeling in this. It seems in this oneshot Peeta is pouring his heart out to whoever will hear. Perhaps for a oneshot this could be a little longer. You could have started at when he got stabbed by Cato, to him hiding in the mud, to Katniss finding him. More detail as well maybe. These are just suggestions though, I don't mean to sound harsh.
I enjoyed reading this overall, I'm excited to see what you're going to write next.
5/30/2012 c1 2XxXConnorXxX
You should really continue this XD
4/28/2012 c1 1prettylily307
I liked, continue!

Be careful of repeating the same information in diferent contexts though. It can make parts of the story drag.

I loved it :)
4/28/2012 c1 1Polska99
Please continue the story! This is one of the only ones that I have seen with little to no grammar mistakes.
4/27/2012 c1 1Justfreezethemoment20
I think that you should continue this story and keep it Peeta's POV , I would enjoy reading it (:
4/27/2012 c1 7ofravenclaw
YESYESYES CONTINUE.

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