9/25/2015 c1 Guest
LOVE IT!

3/19/2015 c1 1Kitao Yoduki
Perfectly perfect. Everything a one-shot needs.

11/23/2012 c1 Awesome
I love Prachel, or Perachel, but this story just made me love them even more!

7/26/2012 c1 Goddess
Alright, I'm back, and ready for a more positive review.
Also, the site wouldn't let me post two review for the same chapter, and so this is the Goddess of Percabeth.
And this one has some actual CC in it.
So I didn't really like the whole thing with the smear on his cheek. And I really hope I spelled cheek right, because I'll sound hypocritical when I tell you what you need to fix next.
Spelling.
It wasn't major, and you could actually tell what you were trying to say (GASP! A fic writer who's spelling mistakes aren't too major!) and there where a few times whn you forgot to put a period at the end of a sentence.
Isn't it annoying
Anyway, in the future, I would be glad to beta, if it isn't too much trouble, because I was a b***h before, and I am really sorry about that.
Listen, you are a really good writer, and don't give flamers like me any attention.
Keep on writing, this site needs more diversity, it would only help the fandom for anything other than Mark of Athena or Percabeth stories to be published.
Thanks for your consideration.
Anna

6/9/2012 c1 11PJatO98
Really enjoyed this story :) A lot of people would kill me for saying this, but: it's good to take a break from Percabeth for awhile.