7/5/2012 c1 Guest
Hi your story was great! But you said five teen years old instead of fifteen years old. You're awsome that English is your third language:)

4/30/2012 c1 Guest
Hi, I liked your story. I did see a little grammar error that I thought was a typo, and then you did it again. You said 'studding' which is really studying, pronounced stu-dee-ing. :)