for My Bangs Are Not Bleached!10/18/2013 c2 
1mrs. zala
WHAAAAT?
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i think my response is same for both chapters. hahaha.
short but entertaining story!
until next time,
mrs. zala
1mrs. zalaWHAAAAT?
...
i think my response is same for both chapters. hahaha.
short but entertaining story!
until next time,
mrs. zala
5/6/2012 c2 Mirus Infidus
Oh, man, this was hilarious! And the two parts complemented each other fantastically. I especially love how they both end with the big pause and then "WHAT?" Man, and Hikaru thought he was being all clever in the first chapter, and then in the second he ain't really firing all pistons. Great job!
Oh, man, this was hilarious! And the two parts complemented each other fantastically. I especially love how they both end with the big pause and then "WHAT?" Man, and Hikaru thought he was being all clever in the first chapter, and then in the second he ain't really firing all pistons. Great job!
5/3/2012 c1 Cute story
Great story. To the best of my knowledge no one has ever come up with this idea before. I love things which are different
Great story. To the best of my knowledge no one has ever come up with this idea before. I love things which are different
5/2/2012 c2 ohmyotps
Haha...very funny little story. It made me smile, oblivious Hikaru is oblivious XD
Haha...very funny little story. It made me smile, oblivious Hikaru is oblivious XD