
5/6/2012 c1
5DownwiththeSupernatural
Newlin has met his match in Lilly. I love it and her attitude. Plus you are superb at characterization as Stevie boy.
Tire flattening was wickedly funny too. Keep it coming girl!

Newlin has met his match in Lilly. I love it and her attitude. Plus you are superb at characterization as Stevie boy.
Tire flattening was wickedly funny too. Keep it coming girl!
5/4/2012 c1 Susan F
Good short story on the Reverend Newlin! Only suggestion is to take out the 'Full of Rapture' in the first sentence. Newlin has that kind of smile anyway, but I felt that it took away from the sentence a bit. He is not my favorite character in the series that is for sure! Good job, keep writing!
Good short story on the Reverend Newlin! Only suggestion is to take out the 'Full of Rapture' in the first sentence. Newlin has that kind of smile anyway, but I felt that it took away from the sentence a bit. He is not my favorite character in the series that is for sure! Good job, keep writing!
5/3/2012 c1 Ghost
Quite enjoyable and fun to read! Not to mention well written and nicely done for the character's needs. Keep the good work!
Quite enjoyable and fun to read! Not to mention well written and nicely done for the character's needs. Keep the good work!
5/3/2012 c1 Trueblood love
you write a funny Newlin
you write a funny Newlin
5/2/2012 c1 Miss MaryAnn
Lil is a smart girl who doesn't seem afraid of anything. I'm looking forward to seeing more of her and her frog. Reverend Newlin beware!
Lil is a smart girl who doesn't seem afraid of anything. I'm looking forward to seeing more of her and her frog. Reverend Newlin beware!
5/2/2012 c1 Sammy
Steve is a trip. I hope you write more.
Steve is a trip. I hope you write more.