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You are Awesome I HATE fake ge is spooky selfish and only thinks about himself and what it would be like if katniss were to love. NEVER GONNA HAPPEN GALE. Thank you.
You are Awesome I HATE fake ge is spooky selfish and only thinks about himself and what it would be like if katniss were to love. NEVER GONNA HAPPEN GALE. Thank you.
12/8/2012 c8 
1Helpless Romantic01
I don't hate you because you killed Gale. I honestly think that if I wrote this fanfic, I'd kill him too. But I wouldn't be so nice about it... In any case, this epilogue made me laugh.
*Gale just died*
Katniss: *crying* He was my friend!
Peeta: Uh... Do you want me to bury him now? 'Cause we got to get home to the baby.
Katniss: LINA! *Drops Gale and runs*
Peeta: ...That was easy.
I guess it makes me a bad person, but I loved that scene.
And the part with Delly?
Delly: *sobbing* I kissed Gale and it was WONDERFUL... I LOVED HIM!
Katniss: ...You wanna help with the baby?
Delly: Ooh! A baby! *tears stop instantly*
Is it wrong that I liked that? Yes? No?
*shrugs* Oh well. Too late to worry about it now.
Thanks for this,
Deni
1Helpless Romantic01I don't hate you because you killed Gale. I honestly think that if I wrote this fanfic, I'd kill him too. But I wouldn't be so nice about it... In any case, this epilogue made me laugh.
*Gale just died*
Katniss: *crying* He was my friend!
Peeta: Uh... Do you want me to bury him now? 'Cause we got to get home to the baby.
Katniss: LINA! *Drops Gale and runs*
Peeta: ...That was easy.
I guess it makes me a bad person, but I loved that scene.
And the part with Delly?
Delly: *sobbing* I kissed Gale and it was WONDERFUL... I LOVED HIM!
Katniss: ...You wanna help with the baby?
Delly: Ooh! A baby! *tears stop instantly*
Is it wrong that I liked that? Yes? No?
*shrugs* Oh well. Too late to worry about it now.
Thanks for this,
Deni
12/8/2012 c7 Helpless Romantic01
...I know it bad to disrespect, but... GALE IS A MORON, SUICIDAL, OBTUSE... I can't say what I really want to say. Suffice to say I hope he ROTS! And I hope Delly gets better we don't need two suicidal morons on our hands. *sighs* I'm sorry for ranting, but I cannot suffer weak-minded, sniveling, ungrateful, MORONS WHO DON'T KNOW A GOOD THING WHEN THEY'VE GOT IT! Perhaps I'm too harsh. Some would argue that he'd been through a lot. Others would say that he was already past his breaking point when he saw Katniss in the woods. Well, I say he doesn't deserve either of them.
Thanks for this. It was... enlightening to say the least. There were parts I loved. Parts I hated., not because they were poorly written (because you write extremely well.) But because I found myself nearly shouting at the screen "GALE, YOU IDIOT. MAN UP! IT'S NOT WORTH DYING OVER!"
But I digress.
I see that you have an epilogue left. I'll go read that now.
-Deni
...I know it bad to disrespect, but... GALE IS A MORON, SUICIDAL, OBTUSE... I can't say what I really want to say. Suffice to say I hope he ROTS! And I hope Delly gets better we don't need two suicidal morons on our hands. *sighs* I'm sorry for ranting, but I cannot suffer weak-minded, sniveling, ungrateful, MORONS WHO DON'T KNOW A GOOD THING WHEN THEY'VE GOT IT! Perhaps I'm too harsh. Some would argue that he'd been through a lot. Others would say that he was already past his breaking point when he saw Katniss in the woods. Well, I say he doesn't deserve either of them.
Thanks for this. It was... enlightening to say the least. There were parts I loved. Parts I hated., not because they were poorly written (because you write extremely well.) But because I found myself nearly shouting at the screen "GALE, YOU IDIOT. MAN UP! IT'S NOT WORTH DYING OVER!"
But I digress.
I see that you have an epilogue left. I'll go read that now.
-Deni
12/8/2012 c6 Helpless Romantic01
I hate Gale sometimes. Which is bad because I try not to hate people... even fictional characters... It doesn't matter, though, because I can already see where this is going. If you hadn't told me, I'd be able to see it. *shakes head* Poor Delly... I hate Gale for what he's doing to her, but I hope she, at least, will be okay. She has a little sister who needs her. Please tell me they will be okay.
-Deni
I hate Gale sometimes. Which is bad because I try not to hate people... even fictional characters... It doesn't matter, though, because I can already see where this is going. If you hadn't told me, I'd be able to see it. *shakes head* Poor Delly... I hate Gale for what he's doing to her, but I hope she, at least, will be okay. She has a little sister who needs her. Please tell me they will be okay.
-Deni
12/8/2012 c5 Helpless Romantic01
Oh, Poor Autumn. I'm glad she and Peeta talked. I hope Delly ends up alright. I also hope Katniss and Peeta can help Autumn. And Maybe Gale will finally realize that it's not actually the end of the world.
...And I'm way to hopeful.
In anycase, thanks,
Deni
Oh, Poor Autumn. I'm glad she and Peeta talked. I hope Delly ends up alright. I also hope Katniss and Peeta can help Autumn. And Maybe Gale will finally realize that it's not actually the end of the world.
...And I'm way to hopeful.
In anycase, thanks,
Deni
12/8/2012 c4 Helpless Romantic01
First off, *ROTFLOL!* Mrs. Everdeen was hilarious!
Mock squeal: Oh, Katniss... *takes breath*
YOU'REMYDAUGHTER,ANDYOURHAVINGMYGRANDDAUGHTER ,ANDTHISISSOWONDERFUL! *click*
Lolz! XD I'm sorry, but that was funny.
*sighs* Now that I got that out of my system, Gale is an IDIOT! The BAKA doesn't know a good thing when he's got it. Here's this wonderful girl who is wearing herself ragged trying to help you because SHE IS IN LOVE WITH YOU! But you're too stuck in the past to see it!
... In his defense, he has had a total break from reality, but... Gale just really erks me.
I'm going to read the next chapter now.
Thank you for this. It brought me near tear, made me laugh, and then left me feeling all warm and fuzzy.
How do you do it?
Deni
First off, *ROTFLOL!* Mrs. Everdeen was hilarious!
Mock squeal: Oh, Katniss... *takes breath*
YOU'REMYDAUGHTER,ANDYOURHAVINGMYGRANDDAUGHTER ,ANDTHISISSOWONDERFUL! *click*
Lolz! XD I'm sorry, but that was funny.
*sighs* Now that I got that out of my system, Gale is an IDIOT! The BAKA doesn't know a good thing when he's got it. Here's this wonderful girl who is wearing herself ragged trying to help you because SHE IS IN LOVE WITH YOU! But you're too stuck in the past to see it!
... In his defense, he has had a total break from reality, but... Gale just really erks me.
I'm going to read the next chapter now.
Thank you for this. It brought me near tear, made me laugh, and then left me feeling all warm and fuzzy.
How do you do it?
Deni
12/8/2012 c3 Helpless Romantic01
I'm sort of in the same mindset as Autumn. Everything seems to have gone sideways and topsy-turvy. I love it! I... There are so many questions going through my mind right now, I can't really make sense of it all. I think I'll just continue in to the next chapter.
Thanks for this,
Deni
I'm sort of in the same mindset as Autumn. Everything seems to have gone sideways and topsy-turvy. I love it! I... There are so many questions going through my mind right now, I can't really make sense of it all. I think I'll just continue in to the next chapter.
Thanks for this,
Deni
12/8/2012 c2 Helpless Romantic01
Oh woah. Poor Delly.
Well, now I understand the end of the last chapter. You, dear author, are very good at playing Devil's Advocate. I do sort of feel sorry for Gale, but I also think he should stop living in the past. I also really feel sorry for Delly, the same way I always felt for Peeta. It hurts to love someone from a distance. It hurts more to know the one you love is hurting and you can't help them. ...Mostly because they can't or won't let you in. So, I guess I can identify with Gale too, it's just that when see someone I like happy with someone else, I'm just thankful they're happy. But I guess that's just me.
I'm going to read the next chapter, but thanks for this one!
Deni
P.s. I loved the Peeta/Katniss cutness!
Oh woah. Poor Delly.
Well, now I understand the end of the last chapter. You, dear author, are very good at playing Devil's Advocate. I do sort of feel sorry for Gale, but I also think he should stop living in the past. I also really feel sorry for Delly, the same way I always felt for Peeta. It hurts to love someone from a distance. It hurts more to know the one you love is hurting and you can't help them. ...Mostly because they can't or won't let you in. So, I guess I can identify with Gale too, it's just that when see someone I like happy with someone else, I'm just thankful they're happy. But I guess that's just me.
I'm going to read the next chapter, but thanks for this one!
Deni
P.s. I loved the Peeta/Katniss cutness!
12/8/2012 c1 Helpless Romantic01
Awesome first chapter.
And... Woah. o_O
So... First Gale just decides to pop out of the woodwork after five YEARS of absense. Then, he searches Katniss out and is surprised when he finds her pregnant with a little Peeta or Katniss. (Curiously the thought of marrige never enters his mind, but he does say he's lost his chance; so maybe it's a given.) Anyhoo, After Katniss unearths all of her anger at him, he decides to just cut his losses and kiss her senseless. Then he throws a hissy fit after Peeta, who saw the yelling and kiss, comes to comfort a distraught Katniss.
That all I understand. (Brilliant, by the way.) It's the last bit that makes me uneasy. Was someone with Gale in the forest? Did they drug him, or was that his own doing? Does anyone else think Peeta should have clocked Gale at least once? Inquiring minds want to know.
But I guess I'll just have to read the next chapter to find out. *shrugs* Oh well.
Thanks for this!
Deni
Awesome first chapter.
And... Woah. o_O
So... First Gale just decides to pop out of the woodwork after five YEARS of absense. Then, he searches Katniss out and is surprised when he finds her pregnant with a little Peeta or Katniss. (Curiously the thought of marrige never enters his mind, but he does say he's lost his chance; so maybe it's a given.) Anyhoo, After Katniss unearths all of her anger at him, he decides to just cut his losses and kiss her senseless. Then he throws a hissy fit after Peeta, who saw the yelling and kiss, comes to comfort a distraught Katniss.
That all I understand. (Brilliant, by the way.) It's the last bit that makes me uneasy. Was someone with Gale in the forest? Did they drug him, or was that his own doing? Does anyone else think Peeta should have clocked Gale at least once? Inquiring minds want to know.
But I guess I'll just have to read the next chapter to find out. *shrugs* Oh well.
Thanks for this!
Deni
6/26/2012 c8 NatalieRose x
Sorry about last review!:D meant I read the whole story in a day not a whole chapter in a day:) silly me;S
Sorry about last review!:D meant I read the whole story in a day not a whole chapter in a day:) silly me;S
6/25/2012 c9 NatalieRose x
Just read this chapter in a day that's how amazing it is!:D well done:) was amazing haven't really read fanfics about Gail so this was a first and I loved it!:D
Just read this chapter in a day that's how amazing it is!:D well done:) was amazing haven't really read fanfics about Gail so this was a first and I loved it!:D
6/7/2012 c1 Guest
Awesome
Awesome
6/6/2012 c9 50keep-swinging
Gale should have died in the books anyway, not Prim. It wasnt as crappy as you thought. I really liked it and this was a great bashing Gale story! :D
50keep-swingingGale should have died in the books anyway, not Prim. It wasnt as crappy as you thought. I really liked it and this was a great bashing Gale story! :D