for Liar8/5/2017 c13 Guest
Enjoyed reading this!
Enjoyed reading this!
11/27/2015 c9 
1mentalfictions
I've already finished this story and have caught up on the sequel, but this chapter has been floating about in my head all day. I think it's probably my favorite chapter of anything I've read within this fandom so far. It's so believable and yet touching. Amazing, amazing writing!
1mentalfictionsI've already finished this story and have caught up on the sequel, but this chapter has been floating about in my head all day. I think it's probably my favorite chapter of anything I've read within this fandom so far. It's so believable and yet touching. Amazing, amazing writing!
11/30/2014 c13 20Quantumphysica
I liked this story, however I think it would have been even better if you had worked it out more, with more and longer chapters. There are a lot of interesting things going on, your plot and OC's are intriguing… but you squeeze it all in so little text, and that makes things confusing sometimes.
If this is the first thing you've ever written, it's really quite good though. (I for one know that my own first writings were far from this level xD)!
I'll check out your other writings soon :)
20QuantumphysicaI liked this story, however I think it would have been even better if you had worked it out more, with more and longer chapters. There are a lot of interesting things going on, your plot and OC's are intriguing… but you squeeze it all in so little text, and that makes things confusing sometimes.
If this is the first thing you've ever written, it's really quite good though. (I for one know that my own first writings were far from this level xD)!
I'll check out your other writings soon :)
11/24/2013 c4 19Lady NeverAfterNon
When writing the subtle change to Neuro's feelings is always a challenge in romance fics, but you seem to be doing it fabulously. Keep up the good work!
19Lady NeverAfterNonWhen writing the subtle change to Neuro's feelings is always a challenge in romance fics, but you seem to be doing it fabulously. Keep up the good work!
11/24/2013 c3 Lady NeverAfterNon
Lovely how this seems to be in keeping with the characters, fabulous work!
Lovely how this seems to be in keeping with the characters, fabulous work!
1/4/2013 c9 ivyknightfire
I like the way u show their relationship b/c I rlly can't c them any other way. :) The mystery is also very nice. :)
I like the way u show their relationship b/c I rlly can't c them any other way. :) The mystery is also very nice. :)
12/4/2012 c4 princessyumemi
U LOVE ME? AW I LOVE YOU TOO! I really like the fanfic it's truning out great!
U LOVE ME? AW I LOVE YOU TOO! I really like the fanfic it's truning out great!