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8/12/2014 c3 18Venusian Angel
You updated!
I love this story even if it is so sad. I love the Mina and Ami friendship as it's one that doesn't get explored much with them being so different but I think they go well together as friends. And I hope to see Mina be the one to mainly help her since she was the one that found her and I believe that because of that her and the three boys would develop a fierce protective streak.
There was a little bit of Mina/Trowa which made me happy lol. And Heero with Hotaru made me giggle. It was good to balance the tough drama of this story with a little bit of humour, not too much that it makes it seem like a joke but enough to not overwhelm the reader.
Please update your stories again soon
8/12/2014 c3 2Love2Read4321
Yes! its nice to see a long awaited update!
The characterization is just BRILLIANT! loved reading the chapter. I feel terrible for Ami though, your description of her appearance was frightening! I can really sense the 'macabre' kicking in.
plus the perfect dream in quatre's mind was just beautiful; a picturesque fantasy that never will be?
at first i thought Heero was behaving suspiciously but now I am assured that the poor lad is shell shocked following the traumatic experience of witnessing Ami in such a state :O
Well now that I've finished my rant, please excuse me while i have nightmares of Ding Dong Bell!
I expect another update soon!
8/12/2014 c2 Guest
Great yet horrifying story! Would like to know the outcome of Ami after this brutal event! Any possibility of an update soon?
10/29/2012 c2 14nequam-tenshi
The details are wonderfully horrific! This just makes me want to cry!
9/28/2012 c2 More
it's been months, I know, but I just discovered this and really hope you continue
6/28/2012 c2 8Grey Wolf4
Well I guessed what happens to Ami and this pretty much confirms it also well written and I like the pairings so far and/or the implied ones but given this is tagged 'horror' I take it there might be more then just Angst and Ami trying to heal with the others helping her correct? Or this is some psychological thriller thing?
6/28/2012 c1 Grey Wolf4
Nice start to this fic and its obvious what happens to Ami and what this Tony guy does to her (as this is horror is he not human or just some sociopath or whatever?). This is a good start and your not mentioning anything explicit is understandable somewhat.
5/17/2012 c2 14MinakoTrickster
I will admit a part of me was scared. I was scared to find out the fate of poor Ami since my mind had supplied so many images, but I had to read. I'm happy to see this continued since Ami needed her resolution or a continuation of the crime committed against her.

You were wonderfully detailed and I think everyones reactions were so understandable. If it had been me finding one of my friends like that, I don't know what I would do. Probably cry and scream to get the bastard who did it as I or someone dialled the police.

I will certainly continue reading as Trowa and Heero's reactions were curious and I do like Quatre's flirty side. But I want to see how Ami will be when she wakes up. I have no doubt the girls will be around her, but sometimes a crowded room doesn't chase away the loneliness one might experience after an event like that.

Once again, you are a wonderful writer and you show it by taking on a subject that not many would dare to tred upon.

Keep up your courageous work!
5/16/2012 c2 JPandS
Geez that was so heart-wrenching. I don't even know what to say about it :(

Quatre's characterization is so sweet to me.

Gah, I'm just speechless. These kinds of topics are so hard for me to comment on.

Nevertheless, your writing is wonderful. And I do look forward to reading more from you.
5/13/2012 c2 18Venusian Angel
Wow your writing is so fantastic and as dark as this is I am loving it.

I love that there are couples that may end up different and jealousies etc. I don't think it would be as simple as each liking one of the boys and it being all happy. As much as the romantic in me would like to believe that, it is far more likely there would be 2 liking the same person.

It is incredibly sad what happened to Ami and the way that you described the way the girls want to take care of her is so believable she seems the most sheltered and naive (apart from Usa).

Also I love the little Mina/Trowa parts as always and hope that it will be that pairing :)

Cant wait for more!
5/12/2012 c2 11NoLongerWriting-AbandonedAccou
I'm like the dark tones of this story, we have so many stories that are fluffy or light and have a different kind of dynamtic but this brings into a whole knew category of drama and other genres like horror and suspense. It's good to have diversity I say but I have to add I love happy endinds. I love sad, dramatic and horror like stories but c; I hope this too will have a happy ending and I'm definately gonna stick around to find out. I do know not all stories end happy though but their still just as good, but I hope Ami get's her happy ending.

The chapter was a lil short but it's alright the way you ended it was a perfect place to end it, giving us readers more suspense as to what comes next.

I almost thought she was dead, but I'm really hoping she's not!

Update soon so I can find out?
5/9/2012 c1 14MinakoTrickster
My face, after reading that was one with my mouth hanging open, eyes wide and just horror. Not at you! But at the imagery of what happened.

The writing was surperb and painted a picture of a woman's anger, sadness and terror that was Ami's emotions. Especially towards the end.

Now, I just want to hold Ami and cuddle her close. You did wonderfully, dear. I could feel Ami's horror and her fright. Sadly, this is a common occurance. My school had three attempted rapes this year, last year was five. Most women walking back to their dorms after a party or performing the walk of shame.

You're a wonderful writer and I hope to see more from you. Thank you.
5/6/2012 c1 6suisei no mitsukai
It's nice to see an Ami centric story. I'm curious to see where this goes from here. Keep up the good work.
5/4/2012 c1 11NoLongerWriting-AbandonedAccou
I am an Ami fan and I LOVE this! I'm a huge fan of all the senshi but with all the Rei and Minako love, your right Ami and Makoto need more lovin, heck all the senshi do! And Luna and Artemis and lol even Mamoru and Chibiusa, but definately the starlights and Kakyuu and Galaxia oh my! Lol I;m bad I love them all c; hopefully we everyone making new stories we'll inspire some readers out their to start their own accounts and join in writing more stories, sharing their ideas and their favvorite characters.

Anywho on to the review.

Your grammar is great and your attention to detail and description is amazing. Despite being a little depressing because of the circumstances you Ami was wonderfully done and I'm so glad to read it. Some tend to change her to much and in an unbelievable sort of way with no room for explanation but you do wonderfully here.

I can't wait to see what comes next because you left it at a cliffy, but it's going to be a great story because your already off to a good start.

YEY we need more dramatic stories now that we have fluffy ones and a chapter story? We always need more of those c:

Update soon?
5/4/2012 c1 Teeny
i love this a lot you should do more soon i hope to see more Lita
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