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4/9/2016 c1 Guest
i love it!
2/1/2016 c1 7Animefortin95
Whoa whoa whoa. You 2 are breaking the laws of man and God. You aren't supposed to do sex at that age. You two are gonna be in big trouble. Really weird but good story.
8/21/2014 c1 Guest
WTF
3/3/2014 c1 killem21
Noce fanfic if u watch key and peele u should know what it means #NOOOOCCCCEEEE
2/8/2014 c1 esanders2001
U write good fanfics by 666 number of the beast was the best it was one of the few long fanfics that were actally good
1/16/2014 c1 Omegahumphrey
What else is new in life? You people act like this story is the worst thing in the world and besides with the world we live in right now it's actually legal in some places for kids to do that and for kids to get married at that age. Right now I'm not surprised that there's kids actually doing this sort of thing right now since the world we live in is screwed up anyway
10/29/2013 c1 12pinkpetal34
...it waz alright. -.-

i dont mind to much about the age cuz they' re not real and all, so it waz alright.
10/5/2013 c1 Gabrielle3989
I hate this story
7/20/2013 c1 4OVEGI
Huh? What the hell is wrong with you?! These are kids! Kids! I wouldn't be surprised if they were teens but having kids do that? I'm about going loco here but children don't have sex. That's just sick! Next time try to think it over before you write something like that.
5/3/2013 c1 10Phantomgurlxxxxx
Cute
3/26/2013 c1 I love sex
Loved it! But there a little too young... Idc though!
8/7/2012 c1 6Noelle la Marie
what? (reads it again) WHAT?! Look, I don't care if their secret agents, spys, have hundreds of gaget's and equipment... THIER KIDS! CHILDREN! CHILDREN SHOULDN'T DO THIS! CHILDREN SHOULDN'T EVEN ATTEMPT THIS! I can understand if they were teenager's and that they would regret it later but... WHAT KIND OF SICKO WOULD COME UP WITH THIS! Also, they are infertal which mean's they can't do half the stuff you make them do! Im sorry, Im not trying to undermind your writeing, It's good writing, but... it's just not possable. I can understand if one of them had an abusive family or something but they clearly don't. so, I'm sorry I don't recomend this to anyone else.

I, Noelle la Marie super alien intellegence, have writen this review. :3
5/27/2012 c1 2Anime Lover Donna
Teehee that was fun to read .
5/4/2012 c1 6DarthWill3
Aw... This is one of the best 3x4 stories you made so far!

By the way, "bottomless pit" really made me laugh!

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