for A New Beginning11/7/2012 c5 charisma girl
WAAAAAAIIII I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! amazing chapter, I SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE, AND I AM SOOOOOOOO HAPPY ITS GOING MY WAY! (HAH, sweetheartstogether!) anyway, i simply adore how its going so far, and im about to take a page outta sweetstrawberrysmiles' book and BBUGG YOUUUUU HURRY UPPPPPPPPP AND UPPDAAATTE MOREEEEEE!
anyway, good job, look forward to the next chapter! :D
WAAAAAAIIII I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! amazing chapter, I SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE, AND I AM SOOOOOOOO HAPPY ITS GOING MY WAY! (HAH, sweetheartstogether!) anyway, i simply adore how its going so far, and im about to take a page outta sweetstrawberrysmiles' book and BBUGG YOUUUUU HURRY UPPPPPPPPP AND UPPDAAATTE MOREEEEEE!
anyway, good job, look forward to the next chapter! :D
11/7/2012 c5 
6sweethearts together
Finally! The one day I'm not there and you decide to go post another chapter! It's really good, a few typos but still amazing! 3 3 3
6sweethearts togetherFinally! The one day I'm not there and you decide to go post another chapter! It's really good, a few typos but still amazing! 3 3 3
9/1/2012 c4 sweethearts together
Awesome! I loved the descriptions of heather, Lucy and Tina. Who is this mysterious boy I wonder? Some guy who's got it out for the malfoys? Loved it. Be quicker next time please hun xoxo
Awesome! I loved the descriptions of heather, Lucy and Tina. Who is this mysterious boy I wonder? Some guy who's got it out for the malfoys? Loved it. Be quicker next time please hun xoxo
7/10/2012 c3 3AKToad
This is a very common idea to write upon. Hopefully you can spice it up a little, make it different. :) Its quite intriguing the way it is, but hopefully it comes with a twist.
I also noticed quite a few errors throughout the story. Perhaps a beta? :P
3AKToadThis is a very common idea to write upon. Hopefully you can spice it up a little, make it different. :) Its quite intriguing the way it is, but hopefully it comes with a twist.
I also noticed quite a few errors throughout the story. Perhaps a beta? :P
7/10/2012 c3 6sweethearts together
Oh my gosh there is an oc named Amy! Oh my golly gosh! Thank you do much! Anyway it is a very good chapter and I loved hearing about pig! Who is tallulah?
6sweethearts togetherOh my gosh there is an oc named Amy! Oh my golly gosh! Thank you do much! Anyway it is a very good chapter and I loved hearing about pig! Who is tallulah?
5/4/2012 c1 6sweethearts together
Why'd you end on a cliffy? It was really good! I love it! And thanks for mentioning me sweetheart 3
6sweethearts togetherWhy'd you end on a cliffy? It was really good! I love it! And thanks for mentioning me sweetheart 3