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7/10/2015 c3 GuardianGirl24
Great ending.
7/10/2015 c2 GuardianGirl24
Great chapter.
7/10/2015 c1 GuardianGirl24
Poor Spain.
2/8/2015 c3 9CheshireKitKat
cute!
5/4/2013 c3 23biibohbro
awww i loved it.
6/12/2012 c3 3PunkKaworu
Girl, you need to punctuate!

You misspled words like write and again and you dont put apostrphey need to indent, because the words are all jambled. And most of all, YOU NEED TO USE COMMAS!
5/6/2012 c1 2xXSlaytonMalfoyXx
It's cute but got some constructive criticism:

- put the story into paragraphs so it's not in a block, it makes it easier to not lose your point while reading =){trust me, I got this same review before so don't feel bad xD}

- also, try using ' for the thoughts and the " for sayings. and give some more info to not make the story so rushed =)

/Anyways! Cute story, on alert now~
5/5/2012 c1 whathe
cute~

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