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57/9/2012 c1 Guest
This was very cute!
I'll be honest; a little hard to understand sometimes, (it sounds like a direct translation, which is always difficult in a translation scenario), but overall, for English being your 3rd language - well done! Keep practising; you'll get there eventually! :)
The storyline was adorable and I really like your version of Marlene (McKinnon is her last name, if you were still wondering).
It was definitely fun :) I liked it :)
Keep it up!
- KickAssChocolateLover
This was very cute!
I'll be honest; a little hard to understand sometimes, (it sounds like a direct translation, which is always difficult in a translation scenario), but overall, for English being your 3rd language - well done! Keep practising; you'll get there eventually! :)
The storyline was adorable and I really like your version of Marlene (McKinnon is her last name, if you were still wondering).
It was definitely fun :) I liked it :)
Keep it up!
- KickAssChocolateLover
5/6/2012 c1 Liana
I loved it! There were a few grammatical errors, but overall it was great! Loved the SiriusxMarlene talking, and the jokes about kissing her, and the laughing! You should definitely write another one! This time maybe when they're still at Hogwarts? A multi-chap fic would be great!
I loved it! There were a few grammatical errors, but overall it was great! Loved the SiriusxMarlene talking, and the jokes about kissing her, and the laughing! You should definitely write another one! This time maybe when they're still at Hogwarts? A multi-chap fic would be great!