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6/10/2013 c9 guest
oh and i forgot to mention something
can you give Yuuko the Kyuubi instead but have the Villigers,ninja and Sandaime believe Naruto has it because Minato-teme
lied to the Sandaime

Giving Naruto the Kyuubi will kinda mess up the point of the idea for his Susano'o
also make his E.M.S. or M.S. special in that the Susano'o jutsu doesn't drain his life energy ( doesn't shorten his life )
6/10/2013 c9 guest
could you give Naruto the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan or Mangekyou Sharingan at some point and make his Susano'o have
the apperance of 'The Shinigami' or something close to it. ( like the one minato-teme summons to seal Kyuubi, search in google if you don't know what it looks like ) It would be an new Idea thats never been done before. ( I think? im not really sure but i've never read a Naruto fic with that idea in it )
5/26/2013 c9 M.D. Hurricane
Can you give naruto some kind of freakish affinity to fire so that its like black or green, or a wind affinity thats so strong he can make his wind jutsu have thermal affects like ice or fire. Also maybe add Yuuko to Naruto's harem so he can have two hot red heads.
5/17/2013 c1 Darkness Shadow
i like the idea of the story because i've never read one that has this idea in mind
i agree with everything GouberMan said (srry im to lazy to write all that)
since this is/going to be a Dark Sharingan Naruto fic can you give him sinister/cold/Dark and potent ( more like even more sinister than the Kyuubi's or about the same, whatever you choose ) black colored Chakra.
( like Madara's & Sasuke's in Anime, i dont know about manga, )( meaning powers up jutsu and a lot less Chakra needed for them
even EMS & MS jutsu ) and plz make all of Naruto's lovers/wifes/future wifes Slightly - Naruto level Dark

If it makes you feel any better at least you can give whatever skill/jutsu Sasuke had that you didn't want him to have to Naruto as a form of your own revenge ( like Kirin... SASUKE DOESN'T DESERVE THAT JUTSU )
5/16/2013 c9 Guest
The manga is wasted since a long while, it shouldn't even demotivate anyone anymore.
Worst crap i have ever read...
5/12/2013 c9 GodEmporer
keep writing
5/11/2013 c9 Uzu kitsune
Don't stop writing please. This is an amazing beautifully dark and twisted story! You can kill off sasuke so naruto can have the Mangeky┼Ź Sharingan after taking his life and transplant his eyes! This can work! It just needs time for sasuke to train and naruto can help him and make him think he's his friend! We all can work something out! Don't let the manga win!
5/8/2013 c8 4Starbeam79
I may not be a NaruSaku fan, but I think you should put Sakura in the harem just for giggles and to satisfy the NaruSaku fanbase. Am loving this story by the way.
5/7/2013 c9 jonale.fm
hey it ok if sasuke is hero in manga ok but you can make your own version and people will be interested in it more
5/7/2013 c9 ninbigboy168
Awww come on your story is awsome i agree do t know what the guys thinking thats why i just stop watching it. Why would he make the most powerful ninja such a bitch? And make the uchiha into a victome threw in threw. I rather just read the fanfiction people write much more better then what he puts down. Come on if u really think about he is saying that an S rank ninja can defeat a tail beast really? Then all the village have to do is have a group of s rank ninjas take care of the demon. It just make me wonder what he was thinking. But anyway ur story is awsome its the 1st one i ever read that started the way u did. Keep doing i know u want to make it as close to the manga but sometimes it just cant be helped. Good luck with the story and please uodate soon/
4/29/2013 c8 ninbigboy168
Dang this is a bad ass story you got to update man its fucken awsome. The story line is great and how you made the 3rd and 4th into the power hungy ass with a fake smile. I think your story is the 1st ive read about naruto been born by rape. And the profose was awsome. Question what about kushina daughter be added to the harem? It be a big kick to the ball to have not only his wife but daughter with naruto. Also with naruto having the sharigan will kyubbi make it stronger? Well i hope u update soon awsome story putting u in my fav.
4/20/2013 c8 Beldak
Great story so far
4/12/2013 c8 36Shadow Knight Destroyer
This is good.
3/18/2013 c1 gast
you need to work on your grammar
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