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3/6/2017 c3 littleberd
QnQ THE REST WHERE'S THE REST!?
8/14/2013 c3 1Blue-Rico
I LOVE this fic! Jak x Daxter was my first OTP, and I really like how accurately you portray their relationship! I can't wait for more!
8/8/2013 c3 Smouse
Yay! Jaxter! :D and I love the Jinx and Thorn bit! So funny XD awesome work!
6/7/2013 c3 3TsukiHime-Sama678
Gah, this story made me giggle and grin like a dork. I love your writing style very much and you shouldn't put yourself down by saying it's shit! I hope the next chapter comes out soon! :3
4/28/2013 c3 dis one guy
UHM UHM MA'AM WORDS DON'T DESRIBE HOW MUCH I NEED THIS FIC TO CONTINUE... SO IF YOU WOULD BE SO KIND AS TO USE YOUR INCREDIBLE WRITING TALENT TO ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER, I'D BE GRATEFUL.
4/25/2013 c3 blackdragon244
this is probably the best fanfic that i have ever read. please continue this story if you can.
4/7/2013 c3 HidanKakuzuFanGirl
more please
3/30/2013 c3 2Kay-Mentrae
Hi there, from another beloved Reviewer hopefully
I can see you seem to be beating yourself up over writing this story, trust me I’ve been there, and writers block, distractions and life in general sucks, but hopefully a few kind but honestly true words might help a bit...
About your story, its awesome, really, even with all the things you listed as being wrong, this is one of the best 'Jaxter you called it?' stories I’ve found in quite awhile, really. The change in how they met and even who they are is quite a nice change of pace and their reactions to each other and just the general way that the behave is in my opinion still in character, and having a few changes with how they might behave makes sense being their circumstances of life aren’t quite the same as in the games and thus the loss or gain of experiences could easily change who they are.
Really this is a very good story as far as I’m concerned and you are a good writer, rushing yourself and fretting over details can just stresses you out, but even so you still manage another amazing chapter, which just proves it. Even if it does take you the next twenty years to write another chapter, I’ll still read it and enjoy it all the same. I hope this makes you feel a bit better, and maybe even brightened you day just a bit, and I do hope you'll write more eventually cause as a fan i enjoy reading a truly good fanfic, but try not to freak yourself out, take your time writing and don’t get discouraged. Because you’re good, and your story is wonderful.

Best wishes to a fellow writer
Shiraha Ookami
3/19/2013 c3 Tarza
moooorrreeee MORE more

*spastic flail*
2/28/2013 c3 Guest
heh, don't beat yourself up so much. The chapter was fun and cute, and the story overall is an enjoyable AU.
2/27/2013 c3 Anon
While this chapter was a long time coming, you are an excellent writer and the chapter was amazingly funny to read!
2/9/2013 c3 8Animeluver4evertimes2
This is my first fanfic in this fandom, and I must say, I'm glad it was. This story is really good so far, and I hope you update eventually.
2/5/2013 c3 Fish
Hope you write the next one! i wanna read more. :D
2/3/2013 c3 43FattySkeleton
INITIATE A FAKE-OUT MAKE-OUT!
that goes on much longer then it should.
2/3/2013 c2 FattySkeleton
awwwwwww!
so cute, and potentinally porny! and i loved the banter, it was really funny!
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