
11/10/2012 c4
26Iridescent Thilbo Bagginshield
This is really good so far. I can't believe what Mike did to her! If I was Emmett, I would have killed him! I'm glad that Jade has Emmett. They are perfect for each other.

This is really good so far. I can't believe what Mike did to her! If I was Emmett, I would have killed him! I'm glad that Jade has Emmett. They are perfect for each other.
9/24/2012 c1 Guest
nice job "emmets demones"... i finnally looked into it. the ONLY problem i found was you tommorrow. ;)
nice job "emmets demones"... i finnally looked into it. the ONLY problem i found was you tommorrow. ;)
7/17/2012 c2
4WhatHappenedToMoonlight
aww now I'm loved. Thank you for putting Char's bar out there. I misses you and ya good twin ;)

aww now I'm loved. Thank you for putting Char's bar out there. I misses you and ya good twin ;)
5/10/2012 c1 emzxxx
This is a really good story idea, for the first chapter its great. However it's easier to read when the paragraphs are shorter. Most are fine but the third paragraph is really long. Also you need to make sure you have quotation marks because it's confusing without. Other than that it's brilliant and I have subscribed. :D
This is a really good story idea, for the first chapter its great. However it's easier to read when the paragraphs are shorter. Most are fine but the third paragraph is really long. Also you need to make sure you have quotation marks because it's confusing without. Other than that it's brilliant and I have subscribed. :D
5/8/2012 c1
4WhatHappenedToMoonlight
write the story ~love your weirdo who is pushing you like you so me

write the story ~love your weirdo who is pushing you like you so me