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5/24/2012 c1 3Spence Sabien
*Laughs like crazy*

Oh, that was funny! I could just picture Grace dangling some poor boy from his ankles, shouting, "You think anybody's gonna care? You just killed two people, buddy. I'd be doin' the world a favor!"

And Steve! The GALL of him! "Danno, at least it wasn't a hand grenade." Priceless!

Wonderful job! I'm off to read more!
5/11/2012 c1 thisisfuckinstupid
This is a great story but please rearange the paragraphs. Besides that, it was great!
5/11/2012 c1 36francis2
Oh my, wouldn't I love to see a) Grace in SuperSEAL mode, b) Danny and Steve making up.
5/9/2012 c1 13HorseRidersHaveMoreFun
I like the little story, but re-think the huge paragraph idea. It makes it extremely hard to read and follow along. I had to re-start 4 or 5 times because I kept getting my lines mixed up.

Really suggest that you edit it and repost it so that it's not one huge paragraph. The way you have it started is great and then it just goes downhill from there.
5/7/2012 c1 Lidil
..."Only you Steven, only you."...

Yep.

Them's our boys.

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