
1/19/2013 c6 MilkywauNaLu
This story is amazing! I can't wait till Natdu and Lucy meet. But hasn't Natsu already seen her? I mean she DID see a flash of pink ;) And she is kinda still wearing the scarf Igneel gave him that he gave to her, even though thier capturing her and taking her somewhere. Also, knowing Erza's strength I'm gonna be laughing my ass off if they try to capture her! Can't wait for Natsu's appearance! Good luck with the next chap! :)
This story is amazing! I can't wait till Natdu and Lucy meet. But hasn't Natsu already seen her? I mean she DID see a flash of pink ;) And she is kinda still wearing the scarf Igneel gave him that he gave to her, even though thier capturing her and taking her somewhere. Also, knowing Erza's strength I'm gonna be laughing my ass off if they try to capture her! Can't wait for Natsu's appearance! Good luck with the next chap! :)
1/19/2013 c6 mika0014
natsu still not come yet? I really want to see this evil natsu
natsu still not come yet? I really want to see this evil natsu
12/31/2012 c6
15Cat Goliath
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CLIFFHANGER! Oh my gosh, I'm really liking this story. Your writing is really impressive. Kinda upset Natsu didn't make an appearance yet, I'm curious as to how you are going to portray him. Keep up the great work, can't wait for that update.

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CLIFFHANGER! Oh my gosh, I'm really liking this story. Your writing is really impressive. Kinda upset Natsu didn't make an appearance yet, I'm curious as to how you are going to portray him. Keep up the great work, can't wait for that update.
12/22/2012 c6 jessica desu
yokatta you updated!
I really like your story! _
just hope you update soon...I'll be waiting ne?
ja
yokatta you updated!
I really like your story! _
just hope you update soon...I'll be waiting ne?
ja
12/7/2012 c6 Zon Yokai Blade of the Spirits
cool story but when is Natsu coming seriously what has happened to him
cool story but when is Natsu coming seriously what has happened to him
11/12/2012 c6
3GoldenRoseTanya
WHATTTTTTTTTT! Waaaaaaah u finally updated and the again waaaaaaaaah! but i understand Riz all da best sorry to hear the news of ur computer breaking down all the veryyy best for ur life!

WHATTTTTTTTTT! Waaaaaaah u finally updated and the again waaaaaaaaah! but i understand Riz all da best sorry to hear the news of ur computer breaking down all the veryyy best for ur life!
11/6/2012 c6
5Skye2306
That was...wow...you are just...wow...
So many things happened in just one chapter and it wasn't cramped or anything! It was awesome!
As soon as the Lord was menchioned I thought 'IT'S NATSU!' And then i kept telling myself, 'Nah, it's not..'
It's killing me inside! What's gonna happen with natsu!?
Please update when you can .

That was...wow...you are just...wow...
So many things happened in just one chapter and it wasn't cramped or anything! It was awesome!
As soon as the Lord was menchioned I thought 'IT'S NATSU!' And then i kept telling myself, 'Nah, it's not..'
It's killing me inside! What's gonna happen with natsu!?
Please update when you can .
11/5/2012 c6
1Killer Moon Lover
wow. long chapter you got there! but a good one at that! update soon :)

wow. long chapter you got there! but a good one at that! update soon :)
11/5/2012 c6
6Angel-Wings Naya
WOW! I have no words! seriously, I just can't wait for more! Great chapter! _
No one can predict the future, there are no guarantees
Naya!

WOW! I have no words! seriously, I just can't wait for more! Great chapter! _
No one can predict the future, there are no guarantees
Naya!
11/5/2012 c6
1dang regacho
O.O NIEBEEEL WHAT AN IDIOT HE IS TSK TSK TSK. I LOOOVE THIIIS CHAPTER WHEN WILL NATSU SHOWS UP HMMMM I MISSED HIM

O.O NIEBEEEL WHAT AN IDIOT HE IS TSK TSK TSK. I LOOOVE THIIIS CHAPTER WHEN WILL NATSU SHOWS UP HMMMM I MISSED HIM
10/8/2012 c5
7Anfitrite-aquarius
Great fic! I cant wait to see what happen next! I hope you updated soon!

Great fic! I cant wait to see what happen next! I hope you updated soon!
9/26/2012 c5 shay
Hey i came to say that this story is awesome! you should really update soon or atleast let someone to adopt the story if you don't have no intention to work on it any more it will be sad to see such a great plot go to waste
Hey i came to say that this story is awesome! you should really update soon or atleast let someone to adopt the story if you don't have no intention to work on it any more it will be sad to see such a great plot go to waste