for Twist in Time9/7/2012 c5 Acemoneybags
I really hope you update soon! This is a great story! I have never seen another like it! I can't wait for Natsu and Lucy to meet! I like how Lucy isn't near as weak and how she fought with grey and wears the scarf all the time! Anyhoo, update soon!
I really hope you update soon! This is a great story! I have never seen another like it! I can't wait for Natsu and Lucy to meet! I like how Lucy isn't near as weak and how she fought with grey and wears the scarf all the time! Anyhoo, update soon!
8/26/2012 c5 jec 3
i love it! the story is getting more and more interesting...
just hope you could update soon... _
ja!
i love it! the story is getting more and more interesting...
just hope you could update soon... _
ja!
8/26/2012 c5 
1Killer Moon Lover
this is really good. can you please update it?! It has almost been 3 months now! :) :D
1Killer Moon Loverthis is really good. can you please update it?! It has almost been 3 months now! :) :D
6/15/2012 c5 Footster26
This chapter was a great setup for the next one! The suspense is growing and i can't wait for more! Where are all the townspeople... hmmm
Update soon! :D
This chapter was a great setup for the next one! The suspense is growing and i can't wait for more! Where are all the townspeople... hmmm
Update soon! :D
6/14/2012 c5 14Queen of Narnia49
SO MANY DAMN CLIFHANGERS!
I would find out where you lived and possibly kill you for torturing me thus if I didn't want to find out what happens next so badly. Grr...
I love everything you've written so far. Nobody's too OOC or anything and you have a legit plot that's keeping me guessing so you're golden in my book.
I understand that life comes up and stuff and you have to prioritize but please, please, please, please update as soon as you humanly can. No pressure or anything though. ;P
-Queen of Narnia49
14Queen of Narnia49SO MANY DAMN CLIFHANGERS!
I would find out where you lived and possibly kill you for torturing me thus if I didn't want to find out what happens next so badly. Grr...
I love everything you've written so far. Nobody's too OOC or anything and you have a legit plot that's keeping me guessing so you're golden in my book.
I understand that life comes up and stuff and you have to prioritize but please, please, please, please update as soon as you humanly can. No pressure or anything though. ;P
-Queen of Narnia49
6/6/2012 c5 Melyora
Owh gosh, that was amazing.
I few days ago I read your oneshot, which had me totally hooked, I tell you. I seriously fell in love with it.
How happy I was to find you made another story! And ohmygosh this is so wonderful! I really the way you describe everything. Can't wait for Natsu to make his debut, though I am fearing the worst... Though for me he has already made a debut D Pink hair, how can you miss it?
I'm looking forward to your next update, take your time with classes, I will wait patiently _
Owh gosh, that was amazing.
I few days ago I read your oneshot, which had me totally hooked, I tell you. I seriously fell in love with it.
How happy I was to find you made another story! And ohmygosh this is so wonderful! I really the way you describe everything. Can't wait for Natsu to make his debut, though I am fearing the worst... Though for me he has already made a debut D Pink hair, how can you miss it?
I'm looking forward to your next update, take your time with classes, I will wait patiently _
6/2/2012 c5 2Tsuki Rae
Great way to mix the original with your own work! The chapter was fine the length it was. I would rather have a shorter chapter that is working with the author's pace and feels good about than a long chapter that the author hates, cause that starts to emulate in one's writing. Even if the next chapter takes a while, at least I have something to look forward to what with all these college finals for the sememster. Can't wait till the next time!
2Tsuki RaeGreat way to mix the original with your own work! The chapter was fine the length it was. I would rather have a shorter chapter that is working with the author's pace and feels good about than a long chapter that the author hates, cause that starts to emulate in one's writing. Even if the next chapter takes a while, at least I have something to look forward to what with all these college finals for the sememster. Can't wait till the next time!
6/2/2012 c5 5wanderingsheep
I really like this story! It reminds me of a flip flopped Fairy Tail world in which Lucy was always at Fairy Tail and Natsu was the one who joined. I like the development of all the characters, especially Lucy and I can't wait to see Natsu's character. I'm looking forward to seeing Natsu and Lucy's reunion as well. All in all, there isn't really anything I dislike about this story, good job!
5wanderingsheepI really like this story! It reminds me of a flip flopped Fairy Tail world in which Lucy was always at Fairy Tail and Natsu was the one who joined. I like the development of all the characters, especially Lucy and I can't wait to see Natsu's character. I'm looking forward to seeing Natsu and Lucy's reunion as well. All in all, there isn't really anything I dislike about this story, good job!
6/2/2012 c5 3Lemonsnaps
Dun, dun, DUNNNNN. Gah! I'm so excited to read the next chapter! Just so you know, I don't mind at all with how you're dealing with natsu in this story. In fact, it just makes me even more excited!
3LemonsnapsDun, dun, DUNNNNN. Gah! I'm so excited to read the next chapter! Just so you know, I don't mind at all with how you're dealing with natsu in this story. In fact, it just makes me even more excited!
6/1/2012 c5 1Words and Fire
LOVE THIS STORY! Please continue!
I really love the character development and your writing style!
There are some grammar mistakes (your and you're mostly) and also some weird tenses that made me think "What?" but it's still easy to understand. Can't wait for you to add Natsu to the story!
1Words and FireLOVE THIS STORY! Please continue!
I really love the character development and your writing style!
There are some grammar mistakes (your and you're mostly) and also some weird tenses that made me think "What?" but it's still easy to understand. Can't wait for you to add Natsu to the story!
5/30/2012 c4 misshus vargas
Some tsundere GraLu moment 3
You, my friend should make a harem of bishies for Lucy.
And I've read your NaLu oneshot too!
That is like, one of the best stories I've ever read !
I like AU stories, you should make mooooarrrrr.
I really should post this review using my account :') its just that i'm too lazy to login using my handphone, sorry writer-chan!
I wonder where did Natsu goes..
And, will Lisanna go to Edolas later?
*sigh* Lisanna is so cute in here, It's a good news that you made lisanna a good girl..
Unlike those cliché fics the authors wrote about Lisanna's being a bitch.
She's a good girl, really.
Well, as long as she doesnt interfere with the 'dense couple-that-is-canon'
Im fine.
And i would like to see a StiCy action in the future (crack pairing)
(Well, i REALLY love NaLu. But i couldnt help pairing Lucy with Sting D': )
I'm rambling too much.
You should make lots'o oneshots. Esp AU's.
God, I love you 3
( And Hachibukai, LEEsup, Absolutely Unsure, FTK and other NaLu/StiCy authors.. But i love you the most..i love you so much that i can stalk you in the middle of the night,watching you sleep through your window)
...
...
...
Okay thats creepy..
..
..
.
And awkward
Some tsundere GraLu moment 3
You, my friend should make a harem of bishies for Lucy.
And I've read your NaLu oneshot too!
That is like, one of the best stories I've ever read !
I like AU stories, you should make mooooarrrrr.
I really should post this review using my account :') its just that i'm too lazy to login using my handphone, sorry writer-chan!
I wonder where did Natsu goes..
And, will Lisanna go to Edolas later?
*sigh* Lisanna is so cute in here, It's a good news that you made lisanna a good girl..
Unlike those cliché fics the authors wrote about Lisanna's being a bitch.
She's a good girl, really.
Well, as long as she doesnt interfere with the 'dense couple-that-is-canon'
Im fine.
And i would like to see a StiCy action in the future (crack pairing)
(Well, i REALLY love NaLu. But i couldnt help pairing Lucy with Sting D': )
I'm rambling too much.
You should make lots'o oneshots. Esp AU's.
God, I love you 3
( And Hachibukai, LEEsup, Absolutely Unsure, FTK and other NaLu/StiCy authors.. But i love you the most..i love you so much that i can stalk you in the middle of the night,watching you sleep through your window)
...
...
...
Okay thats creepy..
..
..
.
And awkward
5/29/2012 c4 FantasyFreak4Life
You ever planning on bringing the single greatest character in the manga in this fic aka Natsu? I'm not a firm believer that Lucy can carry a story herself. Her sole purpose in the manga is to play damsel in distress for Natsu and the stronger members of the guild.
You ever planning on bringing the single greatest character in the manga in this fic aka Natsu? I'm not a firm believer that Lucy can carry a story herself. Her sole purpose in the manga is to play damsel in distress for Natsu and the stronger members of the guild.