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5/28/2012 c4 Princess Happy
When is Natsu coming out?
5/28/2012 c4 3GoldenRoseTanya
please update soon please make it nalu...when will be natsu coming?please don't say he is dead updateeee soooon
5/27/2012 c4 2Tsuki Rae
I just found this story and am in love with it. You've kept the same characters we love but still made the story your own. Your an amazing writer (crying from chapters as I write this :). I'm now a fan! Can't wait till the next chapter. GOOD LUCK!
5/27/2012 c4 Footster26
GREAT addiction! Lucy's character development is very interesting to watch, also i like her relationship with grey, 2 friends that push each other even harder and who truly aren't that different.

Update soon! :D
5/26/2012 c4 1speckledfox
i think you get Lucy's personality perfectly!

like how she acted during the phantom lord arch is similar to how she's acting now, thinking she can handle everything by herself.
5/26/2012 c4 3Lemonsnaps
This chapter was really good! Fantastic character development! I can't wait to read more!
5/26/2012 c4 seethingkitsune
It's quite refreshing reading this story. It's got good character build up and the story line is different from the usual ones I've seen. Good job so far I look foreward to reading more.
5/26/2012 c4 XoxoFairyTailXoxo
IT WASN't Good...IT WAS AWESOME AND I CRIED!
5/26/2012 c4 28Hinagiku Zeelmart
update would you ?
5/25/2012 c3 Footster26
LOVE IT so far! Great job, the Gildarts and Lucy interaction is great! Is he going to end up training her? hmmmm

Update soon! :D
5/22/2012 c3 Minallys
OH. My. God.

You freaking scared me in this chapter!

First I thought Natsu migh be dead, then that he actually was dead!

That Lucy would be all alone?

Good thing she's going to Fairy Tail :)

Update fast!

P.S.- Srry for spelling errors I'm not english.
5/21/2012 c3 3GoldenRoseTanya
love it updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
5/21/2012 c3 Guest
i really liked reading this. for the next chapter, could you skip to, like, a week before they finally meet again? it's killing me to wonder how it comes about. does she still have his scarf when it finally happens? do they recognize eachother at first sight? does lucy scream, "natsu!" and throw herself into his arms as they both burst into tears at the joy they are experiencing at finally seeing their long lost best friend? just kidding. i will loath you forevermore if you do that to my beloved natsu. you aren't that cruel, are you?

anyway, the point is, the suspense is killing me! please hurry up and get to the good part!
5/21/2012 c3 donna
i love it

very!

so brave of lucy in your story

am so excited in next chapter

please update it soon
5/20/2012 c3 XoxoFairyTailXoxo
I Uhh...*Sigh... I'll admit this, but I actually cried! I loved it! And there is NaLu, but I can't wait to see what happened to Natsu! Please CONTINUE! It's a wonderful story, and I just fell in love with this story, already! CONITNUE!
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