
4/8/2015 c1
13umbrella0326
You have an amazing knack for organizing in a very clear fashion someone's personality and history. You lay it all on the line here and the reader is very sure of who we're talking about here.
Love, love, love that Dave is not ready to complete this heavy task and yet, he's doing it anyway. Speaks volumes to his courage and conviction. Nice.
Good story, good character study, good plot decisions, good...just good.

You have an amazing knack for organizing in a very clear fashion someone's personality and history. You lay it all on the line here and the reader is very sure of who we're talking about here.
Love, love, love that Dave is not ready to complete this heavy task and yet, he's doing it anyway. Speaks volumes to his courage and conviction. Nice.
Good story, good character study, good plot decisions, good...just good.
5/15/2012 c1
7deeniebee28
I loved this! This could have been such a great way to bring him back and you mentioned the PFLAG meetings! A wonderful one shot sweets.

I loved this! This could have been such a great way to bring him back and you mentioned the PFLAG meetings! A wonderful one shot sweets.
5/8/2012 c1 FanofChrisCMaxA1
Great story. This or something like this should of happened in the last episode.
Great story. This or something like this should of happened in the last episode.
5/8/2012 c1
4LizzyPoodle
Why, why, WHY is the best writing for this show created in the fandom and not by the actual writers of the show? Why won't they just HIRE YOU ALREADY? Hmph!

Why, why, WHY is the best writing for this show created in the fandom and not by the actual writers of the show? Why won't they just HIRE YOU ALREADY? Hmph!