
8/16/2017 c3 LOOOL chani
FUCKING HELL IT WENT SO FUCKING FAST -/- hate this
FUCKING HELL IT WENT SO FUCKING FAST -/- hate this
4/3/2017 c2 John
LOL this is hilarious!
LOL this is hilarious!
1/21/2017 c3 Guest
I would have freaked him the freak up.
I would have freaked him the freak up.
10/14/2015 c3 Katie
Wow cute but more chapters
Wow cute but more chapters
9/7/2015 c3 Katie
Cute but more chapters
Cute but more chapters
3/4/2015 c1 kingcoley
PLS UPDATE PLSSS
PLS UPDATE PLSSS
2/3/2014 c3 Guest
Once an abuser always an abuser. This
Once an abuser always an abuser. This
12/25/2013 c3 HellsKingCrowley
This last chapter was probably the most unrealistic thing I've ever read, and I'm a proofreader, I read a LOT of stuff. Don't get me wrong, I really don't like critizizing, but ehm yeah...this was quite unrealistic and shorter than me explaining to someone that Nitrogen and Oxygen make Water and for that I would need five words. So I think you could definitely do better if you would have put more time to it, because honestly this looks like you worked on the last chapter for about 10 minutes with a good TV Show running beside.
This last chapter was probably the most unrealistic thing I've ever read, and I'm a proofreader, I read a LOT of stuff. Don't get me wrong, I really don't like critizizing, but ehm yeah...this was quite unrealistic and shorter than me explaining to someone that Nitrogen and Oxygen make Water and for that I would need five words. So I think you could definitely do better if you would have put more time to it, because honestly this looks like you worked on the last chapter for about 10 minutes with a good TV Show running beside.
8/23/2012 c3 Guest
Deuce is gonna die after the honeymoon. Just a guess. (Not a death threat)
Deuce is gonna die after the honeymoon. Just a guess. (Not a death threat)
8/17/2012 c3 bravebuizel012
i likeyour story but chapter three was is this the end of abuse it up?
i likeyour story but chapter three was is this the end of abuse it up?
8/12/2012 c3 random2crazyness
you want to spend the rest of your life with this guy...Deuce you dumb ass
you want to spend the rest of your life with this guy...Deuce you dumb ass
7/16/2012 c3 Guest
Deuce u dumbass
Deuce u dumbass
6/8/2012 c3 kidicaruslover
Please, Write A Chapter Pairing Gunther/Deuce/Flynn/Gunther
Rated M
Please Include Spanking/Gay Sex
Please, Write A Chapter Pairing Gunther/Deuce/Flynn/Gunther
Rated M
Please Include Spanking/Gay Sex