for Spirit Users10/24/2012 c11 Belikov3
Update soon
Update soon
10/23/2012 c11 hope
can't wait till Lola gets there! great story update soon
can't wait till Lola gets there! great story update soon
10/23/2012 c11 Guest
I feel sorry for Jack forced to settle for Jenny but i also think it's unfair what he's doing to her. She's so excited about being with him and he doesn't feel anything for her. anyhow, hurry with the next chappie please!
I feel sorry for Jack forced to settle for Jenny but i also think it's unfair what he's doing to her. She's so excited about being with him and he doesn't feel anything for her. anyhow, hurry with the next chappie please!
10/23/2012 c5 Adrianna
I like this, except for one thing. Have Lissa and Christian become total stuck up royals? Because I can't imagine their kids would say "Mom just called me on my cell and told me that her, dad, their guardians, Rose and Dimitri, Uncle Adrian and Aunt Jill will be coming to visit soon." Rose and Lissa were like SISTERS, so surely they would also call Rose and Dimitri Aunt and Uncle?
I like this, except for one thing. Have Lissa and Christian become total stuck up royals? Because I can't imagine their kids would say "Mom just called me on my cell and told me that her, dad, their guardians, Rose and Dimitri, Uncle Adrian and Aunt Jill will be coming to visit soon." Rose and Lissa were like SISTERS, so surely they would also call Rose and Dimitri Aunt and Uncle?
9/9/2012 c10 Veronica31
For a next generation story this is really good. I like Jack very much and the sister storyline is very intrigueing. It's still a little rough around the edges but i think a couple chapters in and this story will really hit it's stride.
I don't understand why this has so little reviews probably because it's oc. Update soon.
For a next generation story this is really good. I like Jack very much and the sister storyline is very intrigueing. It's still a little rough around the edges but i think a couple chapters in and this story will really hit it's stride.
I don't understand why this has so little reviews probably because it's oc. Update soon.
8/25/2012 c9 Guest
Poor Jenny. The girl is so ambitious lol.
Poor Jenny. The girl is so ambitious lol.
8/24/2012 c8 Guest
Awesome. update soon
Awesome. update soon
7/27/2012 c6 Katherine-Roza Leigh
Pretty pretty pretty please type up the next chapter. I really love this.
Kat
Pretty pretty pretty please type up the next chapter. I really love this.
Kat
7/27/2012 c6 Guest
Really cute continue this soon.
Really cute continue this soon.
7/5/2012 c5 Guest
Love it, thank you for writing :) -booklover
Love it, thank you for writing :) -booklover
7/5/2012 c5 Guest
So Jack has a little crush on Lola huh? Interesting.
So Jack has a little crush on Lola huh? Interesting.
6/20/2012 c1 
1haosthunder
Omg I love jack! Though I wonder if he really does have feelings for Jenny and if Nick does for Haley because they are so obsessed but I hate that royals are better then everyone else attitude sometimes I just want to smack those people! Anyway please update soon! Oh and are you adding/accepting Oc's for this story? I mean its ok if your not I just thought I'd ask.
Ps.- This is a different person then the other review for this account. (We share lol- it confuses soo many people) but can you please still review both of them in the inbox?
Thanx so much! Lol
1haosthunderOmg I love jack! Though I wonder if he really does have feelings for Jenny and if Nick does for Haley because they are so obsessed but I hate that royals are better then everyone else attitude sometimes I just want to smack those people! Anyway please update soon! Oh and are you adding/accepting Oc's for this story? I mean its ok if your not I just thought I'd ask.
Ps.- This is a different person then the other review for this account. (We share lol- it confuses soo many people) but can you please still review both of them in the inbox?
Thanx so much! Lol
6/18/2012 c3 haosthunder
Omg jenny is HILARIOUS lol. But it kind of makes you wonder why she doesn't get the point that he doesn't like her. Lol.
P.S. I reaaalllly hope you update sson (Please?)
P.P.S. Are you going to write/post bios of the characters. (Age, description, element, ect.)?
Omg jenny is HILARIOUS lol. But it kind of makes you wonder why she doesn't get the point that he doesn't like her. Lol.
P.S. I reaaalllly hope you update sson (Please?)
P.P.S. Are you going to write/post bios of the characters. (Age, description, element, ect.)?