for Expired?4/25/2016 c7 Guest
What happened to the expiration date?
What happened to the expiration date?
3/9/2015 c7 Guest
There is one problem with Max landed on her back feet when landing, with her long black panther tail. The minute she lands on her back legs her tail will break, that's why felines like servals have such short tails.
But otherwise good job at writing this. Just that explanation Max gave Fang was too detailed, when writing something like that imagine yourself explaining to another person like it has happened to you, and write it down like that while still making sure it isn't O.O.C.
There is one problem with Max landed on her back feet when landing, with her long black panther tail. The minute she lands on her back legs her tail will break, that's why felines like servals have such short tails.
But otherwise good job at writing this. Just that explanation Max gave Fang was too detailed, when writing something like that imagine yourself explaining to another person like it has happened to you, and write it down like that while still making sure it isn't O.O.C.
8/15/2012 c7 Guest
OMGZ wuz the dun dun ... HEROES like the tv show?omg I love that show if your don't it really good find its good. Anywho the storys ok I only no the maximum rideand NCIS parts but its good
Best wishes
OMGZ wuz the dun dun ... HEROES like the tv show?omg I love that show if your don't it really good find its good. Anywho the storys ok I only no the maximum rideand NCIS parts but its good
Best wishes
6/12/2012 c7 SimplyHope
I wasn't sure if I was going to review, but then I decided to help you get to 18 reviews. Anyways, mostly it's a really good fic so far. However, your writing gets a little hard to follow at points. I have to say, though, I loved the whole scene where she transformed and landed "Iron-man style" Keep writing!
I wasn't sure if I was going to review, but then I decided to help you get to 18 reviews. Anyways, mostly it's a really good fic so far. However, your writing gets a little hard to follow at points. I have to say, though, I loved the whole scene where she transformed and landed "Iron-man style" Keep writing!
5/25/2012 c5 
4holmesian13
lol jk only mhalf sociopathic... Love the fic is good i only understand ncis part
4holmesian13lol jk only mhalf sociopathic... Love the fic is good i only understand ncis part
5/25/2012 c6 holmesian13
lol ur right that would probably happen to me. Well kinda already has. On the verge of full blown sociopath y,no good story.
lol ur right that would probably happen to me. Well kinda already has. On the verge of full blown sociopath y,no good story.
5/21/2012 c1 holmesian13
hello. i like it yeah, but i dont read max ride. update whenever u want. i like that u had gibbs smack tony. lol
hello. i like it yeah, but i dont read max ride. update whenever u want. i like that u had gibbs smack tony. lol